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    Default Whats going on

    this is the first thing Ive ever written its pretty bad but i just want to know what you guys think, im 16 and these are my views on a few things going on


    Now a days we care more about a celebirty
    then we do a tragedy
    and that just aint right to me
    that aint how it suppose to be
    We pay attention to Anna Nicole
    A woman who Imus would call a nappy headed hoe
    more then we do an innocent adolescent soul
    One, two, three, fo'
    or maybe 32 who were killed by Cho
    But those aren't only people who died you know
    Over seas we are giving no help to Sudan
    even though we can
    we just listen to the man
    Bush, who just wants the oil
    putting soldiers on unkown soil
    and the soldiers stay loyal
    give their life for our country
    and that just aint right to me
    cause the war in Iraq is absurd
    The Sunnis Shiites and the Kurds
    trying to make their voices heard
    i wish i could just fly away like a bird
    to land where there is peace
    and all the wars would cease
    then violence would decrease
    no segregation from any nation
    but work together as one
    cuz we all the Lord son

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    Default Re: Whats going on

    That was hot son, keep up the good work, nice theme and flow


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    -You should finish that shit man write up the rest, and post it here!
    Your Writtin' shows you got smarts an' heart-if you enjoy it Keep on with it!

    A 30 sec flow tellin' you what I think:

    Rhyme with intellect-to others benefit
    Tellin' how, and now-not just bullshit
    Lay it on a track, thats at where Its at
    An' sure as shit, the people will be gettin' hip with that
    If you got a message pass it-let the people know
    Cause it all remains pointless, if your thoughts never grow
    To live to see the sun and emerge an' overcome
    Insteada bein' left in the oven 'till they burnt an overdone

    Peace!

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