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    Senior Member MicMonster's Avatar
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    Wake up...
    Dreams die as the glow of a slow sunrise gives birth to today's sunlight
    Hide not behind perceptions upon which you've relied

    WAke up...
    With only respective perspectives to stimulate mind
    Fall in line, Integrate, or emulate mine

    WAKe up...
    6 Walls bound all reason, all intellekt, all time
    all everything, all enything, and all of its kind

    WAKE up...
    This caige is inescapable, yor soul is confined
    Let these werds take hold, slowly controalling your mined

    WAKE Up...
    Beleeve these trooths, Believe theze liez
    Neather heede thease cryse nor believe seeing eiyes

    WAKE UP...



    -JB

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    it's DEEP , WONDERFUL AND PERFECT ...
    great job !!! ty for it ....
    Last edited by SiRen; 31-10-2009 at 4:34 PM.
    ONLY REAL DJs SPEAK WITH THEIR HANDZ

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    good drop man, complex rhymes and it still just seemed to roll off the tongue, keep em coming like this
    im crazy in the cranium, skin like Albanians
    flows blow like uranium, a mother fuckin alien
    sent to this earth as the re-birth of damian

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    Dee cuh! mad respect dawg. Many valuable life answers written in so little words. shit's ill.

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    hot shit there!!!!

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    i was really feelin that. good job

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    this was very different from your usual, i like it, its good to switch up and do this and i like the content, good as always, keep up

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    This would be dope as the hook on an old school Nas track

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    aye wht did you use 2 make this u mad talented mane spill da beans lol
    http://www.myspace.com/247brucewayne
    :thumbup1:

    [YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N0nW8A9nq4c[/YOUTUBE]

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    is this photoshop?
    http://www.myspace.com/247brucewayne
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    [YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N0nW8A9nq4c[/YOUTUBE]

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    photoshop the poem? I dont understand the question...

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    This was sick mane, liked the use of vocab...
    The wake up..between every bar...
    This had a touchy feelin' to it...
    Good stuff man.

    10/10

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    Thats seriously great. the only advice i have is make it a bit longer. but other than that its perfect, although your typos were annoying. but thats the best ive seen on this site so far

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    Much Respect and understanding..

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    The comments are much appreciated...thx

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