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    Default verbal odyssey

    i take you on a verbal odyssey, my words are an anomaly

    droppin bombs atomically, rip out your brain give you a lobotomy

    leave in the morgue for a necropsy

    you cant top me obviously aint no stoppin me

    burn you like exotic heat, then chop your meat

    you just a treat, I need a full meal

    leave you in the street, beat, if you try and pull steel




    not done...but
    Last edited by Damnage; 01-02-2009 at 7:19 PM.

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    Default Re: verbal odyssey

    this came hard for sure, good drop

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    everything gotta be so gangsta?

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    Default Re: verbal odyssey

    Quote Originally Posted by weavee View Post
    everything gotta be so gangsta?
    thats my writing style...i dont rap tho, so its just for me to get it out, you dont like it?

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    Default Re: verbal odyssey

    goes hard...why u always have an odd number of lines though? Usually its like 5 lines or so and in this case 7. Is this on purpose? cause u always seem to stop at an awkward spot.

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    Default Re: verbal odyssey

    yea its just the way it happens.... iono man

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    Default Re: verbal odyssey

    its whateva though...the piece is nice

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    Default Re: verbal odyssey

    Good Ish

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    Default Re: verbal odyssey

    hes right it has an ubalance feel to it lol

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