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    she is everlasting.
    she is everlonging.
    she is everloving.

    she is the ending lyric
    in this beautiful song created;
    Love.

    And she is completion
    for there is no politic or confusion.

    just fusion of our souls.
    of our being.
    One.

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    nice ma real heartfelt and metaphorical
    "come sit, sip from my holey water/ fresh dripped, from the veins of the innocents ive had to slaughter/ imagine the voice of a daughter, begging for the life of a father/ decided ta let him live turned and shot her"
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    *tears shes talkin bout me* snif snif shes really talkin bout me*

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    I think that went a little over my head but it was pretty deep and i like how you wrote it.

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    you cant write about how good my love is in a simplistic form bbk i mean it has to be that deep or u aint talkin bout young ef

    but nah i dont no why her writing is so abstract she is da most simplistic girl i have ever met

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    I think my writing is pretty straightfoward and simple...
    haha it makes sense to me.


    ps. thanks for the replies folks :]
    keep 'em comin.

    it aint deep if it aint dubbz lol (or however you choose to spell it.)

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    That was intricate, I like what you saying, good to see yall folks in love like that, stay that way, 1


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    she betta love me or she knows i'll break my foot off in her ass...nah im playin yeah its real man

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    jerk :]

    thanks pdp..

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    aint no suck thing as love people. but i can tell yall like eachother lots exchangin all these poems. ya'll triple L's, Lyrical, Loving, Lesbians , "I can smell ya light saber" lol if anyone gets that besides ceaser ill give ya 1000 cp bucks
    "come sit, sip from my holey water/ fresh dripped, from the veins of the innocents ive had to slaughter/ imagine the voice of a daughter, begging for the life of a father/ decided ta let him live turned and shot her"
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    Shit, we ALL get that one Ron, everybody here likes chapell like we do.

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    to bri - no prob homey

    to ROn - how you gonna think PDP dont watch dave chappelle jigga?

    To cesare - hes your cousin, you smack him in the head (j/k)

    my reply is hidden as a secret code, if you hit alt and f4, you will see my secret message.


    waits


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    lmao! you a fuckin dont press dat shit ur pc may shut down some wack shit pdp an ass lmao

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    lmao has that happened to you before?
    wow has anyone watched these progressive commercials.

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    the car insurance commercials??


    I watch virtually no t.v,,, its a brainwashing tool. I aint gonna start watching that shit and start liking kfeds raps and start listenin to snap music lol


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