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    "The Tree Of Life"

    One bit from the tree of life at an early age
    The bite small but the effects were enormous
    From an early stage
    The colorless fruit tasted bitter sweet
    Once consumed, the seed traveled down to thy storage compartment
    With the force of calamity
    Suffocating the small & large organs, inevitably
    The embryo sprouted with only one objective
    To cultivate, fill thy infrastructure with an unknown virus
    Effecting all characteristics blinding the retina
    Visual optics impaired cardiovascular system ensnared
    The reaper takes flight, only awakens at night
    The sun covered in darkness, in actuality-- daytime
    Transformed into hours of darkness catastrophic
    Erosions surfaced to the hearts shore bringing a server
    Forever more, calculating the distance between
    Precipitation and malnourishment
    While it continues to rain on ones soul externally
    Internally the roots remain dehydrated
    In search for the ultimate tide of modification
    Thrown off track facing a form of derailment
    Head on, collusions emerge
    The train of thought releases noxious gases
    Into all compartments from head to toe
    The final epilogue concludes with a tag
    Hung around ones toe
    While management was overthrown
    The advisories acquired immune deficiency syndromes
    With no signs of vaccinations
    The results lead to live a life full blown
    This tree of life resembles a tree in the wintertime
    No more green leaves only furled segments
    Thirsting for rays of sunlight
    The nights are colder
    Wind blows through the legiments particles, sending chills on a daily basis
    On the quest to ingest soul food
    Now while searching the page, one can only imagine
    If one never tasted, the pruned tree of life at and early stage.
    Last edited by 360beatz; 06-11-2008 at 9:58 PM.

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    Senior Member MicMonster's Avatar
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    snap snaps to you sir.
    This is really insightful. Truth. If this was one of my literature assignments, I would disect this. But Im short on time, so simply...This is good stuff.

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    Elite Producer Damnage's Avatar
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    thats some deep shit right there...i dont even know what to say....

    not really rap, more like poetry...but shit is still nice....good stuff man

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    Last edited by 360beatz; 14-02-2015 at 12:25 AM.

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