The Secret Life Of Bees

OK so for my english 1 class i decided to make a poem about a book i "supposedly" read.
the book was called the secret life of bees and i get all my info from Wikipedia and this other website called Sparknotes.
so yea...well here it is,give me feedback if u want. I didnt try really hard on it,i just did it as fast as i culde to get to other hw.

"Father is abusive, and Mother is dead.
Father blames me for her death,
But I refuse to believe.
He’s causing me too much pain
So my heart forces me to leave.
To learn about my mother
That’s what I’m trying to achieve.
I have to escape this life,
Like the bees did.
They got out of the jar,
And off with the lid.
So I have to escape to Tiburon
And solve the mysteries about my mom.
On my way, I met this one boy
Maybe the smartest that I ever met
We caught feelings and kissed,
But I’m still not happy yet.
I also met these three ladies
That spends their time with bees.
I asked them questions about my mom
And now finally I see.
I am the reason
Why she died.
I feel guilty,
Since now I know that my father didn’t lie.
So now I call him daddy.
My mom tried to help me
But instead, her plan failed
And it cost her life
So I lost my mother
And T.Ray lost his wife."

yo
that was a good job
I never read that book
but i kind of got the gist of it
thru that poem
you have talent
peace

Good for not even reading the book............