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    Default The lyrics #2

    Look around you self, there's nothing,
    The drugs already killed you, but you're 'till laughing,
    The friends you had , just forgot 'bout you,
    All who's knew about you, already miss 'bout you,
    What to do?
    The life is stopped, no way to choice,
    an' every fuc*in' night...u juss hear mom's voice


    Need feedz plz, don't pay the whole attention to what is about,
    who can explain me the best way to rhyme?
    As i understood, if last words in each senteсe are ending with the same endings
    like
    My life is nothING,
    And now im fuc*ING,
    i see you're smillING,
    e.t.c

    is it sucks?

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    Default Re: The lyrics #2

    need help with it plz feedz

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