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    Default The Last Chapter

    Before you read this you should understand the concept behind it, they say that to be able to write about something you need to understand it inside and out and be able to see through it's eyes, so that's what i did here, the first two verses are from the perspective of hip hop itself and how it's been falling to pieces and about to die out, the third verse is a reflection on hip hop's death, only the real hip hop heads are going to get this in the way that i intended.

    (This contains portions of Edward pinkney's "Health" and "The widows song" along with a portion of "Waif" by Mr. Longfellow, each part reworked in order to fit the theme of my material.)

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    Nobody cared to save me, looked past like nobody's there
    Since a baby, thoughts came to fast for me to bare
    Come read to me some poetry, make it vanish away
    Sooth this restless feeling, banish thoughts of the day
    Is there a way to stop the stress you would care to address?
    Thoughts of bullet proof vests and glocks aimed at my chest
    We live to express, take aim poetically with my pen
    Spin this web of sin, no need for this religion
    As children were walking in the steps we hoped to follow
    Unforgiving, fuck tomorrow was the motto
    Swallowed in the grip of this shit, now how can I explain
    Became a hollow pit, overcame growing insane
    Feelings of sadness and longing that's not akin to pain
    Resembling sorrow only as mist resembles rain
    In the midst of the last chapter, running out of laughter
    After it's said and done, would it even matter?

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    Look how they used to say pray and one day we'd find our way
    What's the use these days? I'm hopeless, my mind would stray
    Nobody even noticed the loaded pistol in my fist
    Breathless, got the kiss of death walking in my midst
    The sickness wrapped itself around my brain, now what remains?
    Whatever distracts the pain helping me sustain
    Liquor in my veins hoping to god they catch me faded
    Gone of gin again, fully eradicated
    Catch me sleeping in the dark, if you got the heart then blast
    I'm having visions of closed caskets and ski masks
    They ask me to tell them, if it's hell then why don't I leave?
    Like Lenore, the bell tolls, weep now or never more
    What I'm living for? Maybe a peaceful night of sleep
    Reap what I sew, hoping death slows to just a creep
    Peak into the last chapter, were running out of laughter
    After it's said and done, would it even matter?

    [Hook]

    Her every tone is music's own in a way you never heard
    And something more than melody dwells in her words
    Who could tell one day she'd leave, passed away not many grieve
    Conceived to fade away, replaced by a new breed
    Of her bright face one glance will trace a picture on the brain
    And in our hearts is a sound that must long remain
    My memory contains thoughts of her that always endear
    Taught me these lessons, her expressions always clear
    I save my tears in the hopes she reappears once again
    A few chosen men with pens to begin once again
    I burn no candles and hang no wreath upon this tomb
    Can't cheer the place of grief but only mock it's gloom
    Doomed to never shed a tear or bring flowers in their stead
    They loose their perfume and power when offered to the dead
    Like I said, it's the last chapter, running out of laughter
    After it's said and done, would it even matter?

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    Damn homie that was a excellent song and concept, I know exactly what your showing us here, from the beginning of hiphops downfall to the aftermath of todays present state, through your eyes (narrator), basically showing hope for the "Real" or "Old school" hip hop that was of present, to return again.

    Again, Excellent

    Deep shit homey. 10/10


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    Quote Originally Posted by PDP View Post
    Damn homie that was a excellent song and concept, I know exactly what your showing us here, from the beginning of hiphops downfall to the aftermath of todays present state, through your eyes (narrator), basically showing hope for the "Real" or "Old school" hip hop that was of present, to return again.

    Again, Excellent

    Deep shit homey. 10/10
    YES!! EXACTLY!!!!!

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    Does that make me a real hip hop head then lol.

    Again man sick written.


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