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    Member MVProductions's Avatar
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    Default The Best

    This verse isn't quite finished yet, but let me know what you think

    MV on the flow dog, you know that I deliver it
    2 Letters, emcee, aint nobdy better than
    never showin class matter fact I have no etiquette
    better duck ya muthafuckin head before I sever it
    only 19 but they callin me a clever kid
    switchin up the subject now we on to the predicate
    haters can't get a grip, I'm hotter than a kettle get
    aimin metal let it rip,
    lead split ya head, like a machete hittin lettuce
    ----- bloodshed is my fetish, if I want it Ima get it
    bred a rebel and a soldier,
    cuz I'm only takin orders from the devil on my shoulder
    never get on my level, sour got me higher than treble

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    Default Re: The Best

    thats not too bad actually. First couple of lines didnt make a whole lot of sense but after that it picked up. a quick piece but it was decent

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    Default Re: The Best

    MV on the flow dog, you know that I deliver it
    2 Letters, emcee, aint nobdy better than

    2 letters refers to my name, MV, and emcee (MC), its wordplay my dude.

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    Default Re: The Best

    oh alright, cool. Well keep em coming

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    Default Re: The Best

    i like it, its solid...some nice wordplay, good flow...in this type of piece i generally expect more metaphors or punchlines but this is a solid drop. keep up

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