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    Registered User 914's Avatar
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    Default The Beginning (5 Bar Intro)

    You dudes~are~lame, blew up in Converse new~to~fame,
    Now I got Chuck Taylor on my dick like I just screwed~the~Game,
    Hollows will leave a line~on~yo~lip, call me ballpoint cuz I'm fine~with~the~tip,
    Squeezing into your girls jeans the only itme you have a nine~on~yo~hip,*
    My knif'es the the true starter of As~I~Lay~Dying,**
    Now they call me liquid metal as~I~spary~iron,
    I stay on wax cuz I'm in yo kid's ears more then iPod head~phones,
    Could get ya head~blown, killing emcees in my music so they call it dead~tones,
    Peeling caps with a led~comb, you a one hit wonder repeat like a said~song
    Might as well head~home, cuz I've punched the numbers of more shooters then a fuckin' fed's~phone.

    Short 5 bars I did cuz I'm bored lol. Its late so it might not be the best I've ever done but I did it anyway. FEED:!:

    * As in the size on the tag which is sumtimes on the hip.
    ** The punk band As I Lay Dying.

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    Default Re: The Beginning (5 Bar Intro)

    not bad man not bad at all
    "come sit, sip from my holey water/ fresh dripped, from the veins of the innocents ive had to slaughter/ imagine the voice of a daughter, begging for the life of a father/ decided ta let him live turned and shot her"
    LEATHERFACE
    back again

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