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    when times get hard its the bassline that soothes me
    when i feel its all over its the lyrics that move me
    soothing music, intoxicating trueness
    i love it but i use it as my way to get through this
    an escape from reality a saviour for my mentality
    i cant begin to explain, it just helps to ease the pain
    i can relate to the emotion, determination and devotion
    shown by the artists, not the hardest but the smartest
    the ones that put emotion and meanin in the lines
    not the ones that chat about bitches when they rhyme
    cos it the true shit that makes real rap music
    not the wannabe mcs that came hear to abuse it
    since i was 9 ive clung to rhymes knowing they can save me
    take the weight and ease the hate when i am feelin crazy
    when the shit in my head gets to much for me to take
    music will be there, with hip hop i can not break
    its like the glue holdin on the broken pieces of my soul
    i dont have a game plan but i do have a goal
    to make my name, leave a stamp on the game
    but im here for the respect i aint in it for the fame
    im hear to get my voice across let others hear my thoughts
    let you hear about the issues leavin me distraught
    i dont have lyrics off the dome they take a bit of thinkin
    but once i spit my words will rip, i will leave your ship sinkin
    see i got the brains to get real far but that shit aint for me
    id throw away all my smarts to be a real emcee
    cos i dont give a shit bout money thats all the brains will get me
    fuck the money im rich with words, which is why u wont forget me

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    Default Re: soothin music

    you're getting a lot better, all I can really tell you is to try being more creative on your topics. It seems like you're rapping about pretty much the same thing in every verse. Other than that I'm impressed with how well you're coming along, keep it up.

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    Default Re: soothin music

    ^agreed, this is LEVELS above what you were posting before, just try to range yer topics. Keep Up

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    Mate thats wicked totally wicked cant wait till the next verse keep goin man

    Nightcon

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