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    Default Scenario

    <Wrote this one a couple days ago. Might be a little hard to read as far as sensing the rhythm goes, but its really fast paced. I barely have room to breathe when rappin it. So yeah...any thoughts? comments? criticism? All opinions welcome.>


    Now follow me as I follow the lead-in
    Set my feet, heeding the start of my heat man
    Burst onto this track like ive come to a meet and
    proceed to increase the speed that I speak in
    So get behind me, Im pullin away
    Spittin '08 game and my name is Usein
    The thumb and index have been lyrically trained
    you cant cross my style, need to stay in your lane
    One by one, disqualified or let em tire out
    and when they're mollifed thats when I spit the fire out
    Then elevate the pen when I celebrate gold
    And bring home the flow to educate these Joes
    so you see my reason, cause otherwise it would seem as treason
    to withhold such a skill this decent
    Still remain training body and brain for next season
    Cause I cant go hard if Im taking it easy





    I hear the fool is teachin and the godless preachin
    So I load the mental nine and point it at the heathen
    While I grit my teeth and begin to squeeze it
    with the purpose being to end his breathing
    NO!..never mind, I must keep my mind benign, deny
    myself the right to lose controll of my lines
    Cause if I decide prime, Im killin indiscriminately
    And my sig will be my penmanship B (but too late)
    I snap back from the past blackout and wont remember
    Where Im at, Why Im here, and why dude's dismembered
    The mic is in my hand, but dont understand how I got on stage
    The crowds afraid, DJ backs away
    Time to bounce out, cause Im so confused
    So Im out the back door but meet the boys in blue
    My chest tightens at the sight and I reach for my inhalant
    But sniper has shot, he decides to take it



    ...Ok, last scenario
    Im half-sleep in my cruise ship cabin and Im blastin my stereo
    On a very old ship dubbed Hip Hop Swagger
    and Headed for a land called MC Status
    We get halfway there when the tragedy strikes us
    Capt was showin off his chain and forgot about the ice
    Got a deck full of writers, lyricists, and biters
    And they say only the ballers will make it with their lives
    ha, Scratch that, im pushin women out the way
    Trip a kid and triple kick the attendent in my space
    Its natural selection and Im all about survival
    If you all about possessions then stay up out my lifeboat
    Thus narrowly escaping a grave of mental death
    The last survivors of the game watch it sink into the depths
    Keeping eyes on the prize and the rise of the horizon
    Not assured to reach shore, but still we will our oars foward
    Last edited by MicMonster; 07-11-2008 at 7:33 PM.

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    Default Re: Scenario

    good drop


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    Default Re: Scenario

    thx

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