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    this is a writing exercise i use to do in college you come up with a concept and you think about it and write random wordz that pour into lines and shape into creative writing about that topic...its kinda abstract and sometimes it shapes up not to mean nothing but it depends on how you voice your words

    dope sales got feinds using dirty needles in project hallways, right next to them

    a baby crying for dear life stuffed in a garbage can face down diaper up frame dirty as fuck/ but those dark brown eyes are bigger and much more beatiful then that rose thats growing out of the concreet about three feet from that

    liqore store that keeps selling henny to teens for an extra dollar on the tab
    overweight girls sniffin coke because the dealer says "a few hits of that u gonna lose that flab" three years later, brenda had a baby

    in the hood its real, not like what you hear in rap music, its realer then that
    15 year olds have three year old children that they feed half cooked tv dinners prepaired in microwaves that barely warm water

    is life over? almost but i feel like an all american football player runnin up the feild then i get tackled at the 2 yard line...fumble...lost to yards

    most teams would hudle come back me im not like dat i stood alone like rassed wallace on a time out threw my hard hat on and plowed through the defense like a steam roller on steroids

    after football season time gets hard im back on the block like shaq trying to post up

    pushin lil -----s in the paint like paint brushes...no matter how much i try to do good i can't get out the game..im beggin for six fouls to sit on da bench i guess im not built for this, i was put together like a jinga bulding i been wobblin every since tha dealers put that last brick on my head



    tell me if u understand tha abstract angles

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    Default Re: repost: inside out poetry

    Yeah, I like that stuff, man. It's like spoken word. What I get outta the technique your trying to explain is similar to word association, but your forming logical phrases. Anyway, it gave me a new perspective. Peace

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    Default Re: repost: inside out poetry

    thats whats up im glad u liked it

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    dope sales got feinds using dirty needles in project hallways, right next to them

    a baby crying for dear life stuffed in a garbage can face down diaper up frame dirty as fuck/ but those dark brown eyes are bigger and much more beatiful then that rose thats growing out of the concreet about three feet from that

    liqore store that keeps selling henny to teens for an extra dollar on the tab
    overweight girls sniffin coke because the dealer says "a few hits of that u gonna lose that flab" three years later, brenda had a baby
    Thats all you Dubz? im impressed as hell with that shit, find a beat, balance out the lines and spit that shit over it, do a remake to "Brenda's got a baby" but with your own twist, mabey switch up the beat a little bit and kill it.

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    Default Re: repost: inside out poetry

    think so...i tend to seperate my poems from my music

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    Default Re: repost: inside out poetry

    Use you poems for that more personal shit, when your writing a rhyme and want to have some of that reflective deep type of stuff, whip out you poem notebook and lace your rhymes with material from your poems, its all related, you know what i mean? your lyrics ARE your poems and vise versa.

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    Default Re: repost: inside out poetry

    ^cosign

    a record, is just a poem to a beat (with the right beat, jay skip knows what I mean)

    its all related


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    Default Re: repost: inside out poetry

    not for me


    me i make music for fun to party and cause im actually good at it and if you seen me in da lab put together a song you would be amazed...

    gimmie a beat and i'll have a finished proddy for you in a few minutes cause its nothin for me to hop on a beat and make it work for me... but my poems they mean a lot more to me then a lot of tha songs i write have written and will write.

    Basically to make a long exsplination short i can get away with doing a lot less and get a real good result when it comes to music as when it comes to my poetry i gotta do a lot more for it to be effective

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    Default Re: repost: inside out poetry

    All im saying is, look at how Pac did it, he did the party shit, hustler shit, happy shit, sad shit, introspective shit and the gangster shit, he knew that in order to sell the most and seal his spot, he had to do shit that apealed to everybody, shit that no matter who you were you could feal, thats why the guys was a living legend and a legend in death, he diddent make music for just one kind of person, he did it for all people including himself.

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    Default Re: repost: inside out poetry

    i feel you son i'll think about it shit u herd dat kilos joint man listen its fiyah and i didn't even write thats why i dont do it but i guess i'll try

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    Default Re: repost: inside out poetry

    loved it babe
    seriously... i read it a few times over.

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