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    Senior Member MicMonster's Avatar
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    Default Quickie 16

    Wats up fellas. Not a lot of material has been posted up lately, so i figured i might as well put some of mine out there
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    Yo, Im just that 3rd string QB, waiting patient lacin'
    up his shoestrings, loosely waitin' on coach to use me
    Guess when im in the crowd its just easy to lose me
    cause usually at the peps, they dont even introduce me
    Ayo its time to make moves and prove things
    Study game film with the notes on loose-leaf
    weight build, late drills, I produce profusely
    'til Im fantasy league, yall draft me, never proofread..
    excuse me, believe you me, I drop styles
    and rain slang to bring the floor to a few knees
    If we trail I throw all hell like a chill with Mary
    its kinda scary how Ive changed from what I used to be
    a dotted eye, snotty nose, and a big headed kidder
    Now i got spare game for you pinhead nggas
    Movin up the ranks, what was secure is in doubt now
    Coming for that #1 spot like a muh' Fn countdown
    Last edited by MicMonster; 30-09-2010 at 12:49 AM.

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    Default Re: Quickie 16

    Nice drop, last two bars are definatly my personal favorite but the whole things dope. Keep up the good writing
    im crazy in the cranium, skin like Albanians
    flows blow like uranium, a mother fuckin alien
    sent to this earth as the re-birth of damian

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    Senior Member Keen Mind's Avatar
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    Default Re: Quickie 16

    this was solid especially for something quick, it was easy to follow and easy to find the flow...solid finish as well. keep up

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    Default Re: Quickie 16

    definately good lyrics and metaphoricaly one of the best ive seen on here.
    "come sit, sip from my holey water/ fresh dripped, from the veins of the innocents ive had to slaughter/ imagine the voice of a daughter, begging for the life of a father/ decided ta let him live turned and shot her"
    LEATHERFACE
    back again

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    Senior Member MicMonster's Avatar
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    Default Re: Quickie 16

    Good look, thx yall.

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    Default Re: Quickie 16

    keep up the good work last 2 lines were nice

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    Default Re: Quickie 16

    sick lyrics like the content of it its clever for a quickie keep it up mate

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    Default Re: Quickie 16

    Very nice work

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    Default Re: Quickie 16

    I agree with keen mind, usually when i read poeple's rhymes i can't find a rhythm in it. but your's was easy to keep a rhythm to. you got anything recorded i can hear?

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    Default Re: Quickie 16

    Dopee. I agree, the last 2 lines were a nice way to end it bro.

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    Default Re: Quickie 16

    Sweet ... let's see some more. Keep on keepin' on!

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