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    Default Part Time Father (Full Version)

    I been playing 2Pac's "Part time mother" for a while now and thought id do my own take on it from another perspective, here's the final version.



    Part Time Father (Full Version)

    VERSE #1

    Not speaking of innocence, now let me commence
    The situation is tense and i cant make sense
    All he knows of is the path that his father choose
    Goes 2 show, the aftermath as this child grows
    From out the womb, bear witness, a rose in full bloom
    Exposed 2 this cold world, struggling but still doomed
    I wear the shoes of a man without shit 2 loose
    Do what i choose while clutching these twenty twos
    True how i used you, then I'm gone without a trace
    No doubt i was wrong, look what i left you 2 face
    The case of another hopeless situation
    How can i embrace it, 9 months of gestation
    No education or job, I'm stressing hardcore
    Oh no, i cant help but 2nd guess what's in store
    She tells me were blessed, we'll survive and do our best
    Another test, i close my eyes but i can't rest

    [HOOK] (samples "part time mother" by Tupac Shakur)

    VERSE #2

    I can't believe that I'm plotting on cutting ties
    Try 2 rationalize, yet and still i realize
    This baby's got the same eyes, plus he smiles like me
    All the while, maybe i was in denial you see,
    Check our history, blow ups and apologies
    Now tell me, how can we plan our own family
    God don't like ugly, just look at the both of us
    Where must i steer in order 2 secure some trust?
    Look at us fight and cuss right in our own son's sight
    Despite the fact that it fills him with so much fright
    I tell you so long, I'm out the door, now I'm gone
    Wish i could have gave her more before i move on
    Not that i approve, we just never had a hope
    You once spoke of a world where we struggle 2 cope
    At the stroke of midnight were walking a tightrope
    Between burning love notes and plotting 2 elope

    [HOOK] (samples "part time mother" by Tupac Shakur)


    VERSE #3

    Thought i could be an honest man and take a stand
    Offer my hand and maybe she'd understand
    Never planned 2 abandon my sons or daughters
    It's even harder 2 be a part time father
    Wish i could hit rewind and take it back in time
    Criminal mind, wanting things i deemed 2 be fine
    Like a dope fiend, my eyes on all the wrong things
    Breathing pistol smoke and lies, watch what it'll bring
    Continue 2 sing 2 the tune of my own ruin
    Doom and gloom, she knows i won't be around 2 soon
    visions of a bride and groom, seems somebody lied
    Fishing for truth, hope died for us side by side
    Now we got a little kid caught in the middle
    Riddled with confusion and a mind so brittle
    Let's look 2 the future and check his mental state
    Hates his father and can't wait 2 retaliate

    [HOOK + OUTRO] (samples "part time mother" by Tupac Shakur)

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    Default Re: Part Time Father (Incomplete)

    thats fuckin fire homie, that is one hell of a good scheme, solid content, had me thinkin you write from the heart


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    Default Re: Part Time Father (Incomplete)

    had me thinkin you write from the heart
    That's the only way to do it.

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    Default Re: Part Time Father (Incomplete)

    I meant to say in a pac like style, but I hit post reply (im at work, busy as shit)


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    Default Re: Part Time Father (Incomplete)

    Tight lines fo reazy, finish it up if ya get the time.

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    Default Re: Part Time Father (Full Version)

    Full version posted, let me know what you think.

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