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    Senior Member Keen Mind's Avatar
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    Default Overdose (Fall From Grace 2)

    straight comatose from the overdose wakin up to shit thats unfamiliar
    doctors like "that little stunt could have killed ya, now we gotta bill ya"
    "This may seem bad, we think you need rehab" thats what they said verbatim
    saw three pills on the floor dove down and quickly ate 'em
    then they watch me go to rest off the placebo effects
    so where do we go next, I choke on a pill and let my mind pass away
    the pastor prays for me to talk to god like I care what he has to say
    shit, pass me like four of those norcos, so i can quickly pop 'em
    I'll sniff 'em if you chop 'em "NO! somebody stop him!"
    poppin these pills is such a hazardous game, this bastard's insane
    he mine as well splatter his brains, combust under gathering rain
    to wash away the scattered remains, do I have to explain?
    went crazy and said that the lord of Nazareth came
    but when we asked him his name, he exploded like a fat old grenade...
    we apparently rattled his cage, the beast has been awakened with rage
    give him a valium, we need to get him out of this manic state
    on second thought give him these oxy's and ask him how this xanax tastes...


    again, written as it came to mind...


    to be concluded in Fall From Grace 3

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    Default Re: Overdose (Fall From Grace 2)

    Nice way to paint the picture. well written. To be honest, I never could grasp the cadence/flow of it all, but I know its there in some form. How many of these "Fall from Grace"s are u trying to write.

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    Senior Member Keen Mind's Avatar
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    Default Re: Overdose (Fall From Grace 2)

    theres only one more that i plan on but like I said its written as it comes to mind... and yeah the flow is a bit strange, its kinda unique to myself and few others

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