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    the first verse of this was a freestyle that i was but a few of my bois talked me into writin a track with it. this is waht i got so far

    i put my blood sweat and tears in this shit when i spit
    but it just aint enough, i still cant make a hit
    cant make a tune that these kids bop there head to
    and im slowly goin crazy cos ive run out of meds dude
    no little pills left to help me through the night
    or give me the courage to back down from a fight
    now im in full rage like an animal caged
    write bars on the page hopin it will go away
    but it just keeps buildin, kinda like construction
    leading to destruction and possibly abduction
    now im walkin with a blade just waitin for the day
    that i dig out my spade to start diggin a grave
    cos ive flipped in the street smashed a bar in your teeth
    stomped on your head and put your family in grief

    i gotta relieve this
    i know i can achieve this
    i just gotta try
    and give it all my might
    cant give up yet, ive gotta keep fighting
    gotta keep writing i cant keep on biting

    all my life i bit at every little thing
    man say hi wrong ill smash him in and take his bling
    cant carry on like that, i gotta change my ways
    before i lay either dead or in a 6 by 8 cage
    gettin raped everyday by the man in cell 8
    cos he likes my arse and apparently he's gay
    i dont want that i wanna live my life right
    wana prove i am bright and i can make the dark light
    so heres what ill do ill up my medication
    up my dedication and my determination
    prove i can do it, to myself and the world
    and most importantly, my mum and my girl
    thats who this is for, ill prove it to you both
    but i may need some help and a little bit of hope

    i gotta relieve this
    i know i can achieve this
    i just gotta try
    and give it all my might
    cant give up yet, ive gotta keep fighting
    gotta keep writing i cant keep on biting

    i got a serious case of writers block when i got to the third verse, ill pick it up anoher time
    im crazy in the cranium, skin like Albanians
    flows blow like uranium, a mother fuckin alien
    sent to this earth as the re-birth of damian

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    You did a good job of illustrating how frustration becomes blind rage. Looking forward to reading the finished work. Keep on keepin' on!

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    cheers for the feed
    im crazy in the cranium, skin like Albanians
    flows blow like uranium, a mother fuckin alien
    sent to this earth as the re-birth of damian

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    agreed with jefpeace

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