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    Livin the Atheist life Cesare Borgia's Avatar
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    An aberration thriving in his imagination
    All 2 often chasing after false manifestations
    The prototype creation of the most heartless type
    Down to ignite a riot and bathe in the delight
    Fuck your contrite, I have no soul and know not wrong or right
    I live for spite and at night is when I lose control
    The can't console or understand I was never whole
    So I stroll the streets with the goal of finding fresh meat
    Lives stole to fill the hole that will never be complete
    Repeat the act and over time it becomes a pact
    A trap of sorts got me committed to this blood sport
    My report on being a killer, my last resort
    The corpse came to diner but Lynch was a beginner
    This shit warps his, my resume of a real sinner
    Today I wake with the urge to see bodies decay
    A buffet, I hit my prey and take their lives away


    My eulogy will read “here lies a corrupted seed”
    Grew from greed and bloomed to cause motherfuckers to bleed
    Conceded my soul so the sympathy might recede
    Got no need compassion, I enjoy evil deeds
    It feeds the hunger I discovered when I was younger
    The wonder as my first victim was torn asunder
    Perhaps my blunder was feigning human compassion
    When my real passion lied in the knife used for slashing
    Your life is trivial, I have needs to be fulfilled
    And if I could kill you, id do it just for the thrill
    Until I suppress the urge, your lives are on the verge
    How can I express the satisfaction and the surge?
    Purge you existence and then murder your very soul
    Now past the point of control so I follow the pull
    Today I wake with the urge to see bodies decay
    A buffet, I hit my prey and take their lives away

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    Default Re: My Prey

    is this an old one? I could've swore i've read this before...

    regardless, this goes hard.

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    Livin the Atheist life Cesare Borgia's Avatar
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    Default Re: My Prey

    The fist part was from a single verse rhyme i did quite a while ago, i added a second verse and tweaked a few things on this one, so yes, the first verse is an older one but the second verse is repetitively new

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    Default Re: My Prey

    this was cool, i like the second half more than the first, to me it seems to come harder, I'd like to see more wordplay but i'm content with this piece overall. keep up

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