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    Default My Lil Baby Boo

    I gotta earn some money.. you gotta love me honey,
    cuz when ive had a rough day i need someone to hug me,
    its not sentimental.. i keep my taughts in my temple
    with all the memories.. that will last for eternity,
    when i was young i got scared.. but i guess all the bad shit kept me prepared,
    making regalur crack sales while you laid at home in the couch drinking hot ale,
    i sparked a blunt and watched time go.. curiosly watchin how the junkies died slow,
    i got up in the benz and burned a lil rubber.. watchin all the rich kids ridin wi der shiny hummers..

    i didnt feel greed cuz i dont care.. ders only one thing in this world that i perfer,
    and thats bein with you! alone! my lil baby boo...

    (1st verse still needs touchs feed is appreciated!)

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    Default Re: My Lil Baby Boo

    looks straight so far. Nice flow, nice rhymes. Just one small thing though (take it or leave it). That little half-line where you say "i didnt feel greed cuz i dont care". I cant put my finger on it, but the verse kinda looses its momentum at that part. Its right before the most important line where u say baby boo at the end, so your gonna want that line to kinda build up to the "alone wit you, baby boo" part. nah'mean

    sidenote - Im probly just overanalyzing but thats the only thing that caught my attention.

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    Default Re: My Lil Baby Boo

    Alri tanks for the heads up il change it up a bit tanks 4 da feed

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    Default Re: My Lil Baby Boo

    Im feelen it sounds like a dope track would love to hear it when its done!

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