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    i had some little dick from a rival firm try startin some shit sayin he was screwin my misses and shit so i spit this at him, the little c*nt froze after this shit

    you dont really want it, im sicker than vomit
    fuck your girl on my bonet when im high on the chronic
    that sticky green shit one hit and i hit
    your girl from the back like the dirty lil bitch
    that she is, watch this, ima rip him apart
    ima weaken his heart leave him dearly depart
    its that mr base head ima mess with ya head
    by tellin you what your mum said when we were in bed
    "HARDER, FASTER GIVE IT TO ME DEEPER"
    her pussy got hungry but i was there to feed her
    see i could be your daddy, i know u never knew him
    neither did your mum she just met him and screwed him
    speakin of which i still owe her money
    here take this £20 and give it to your mummy
    but remember my change cos she just wernt that good
    your misses was better than your mum ever could
    be, be, its clear to see the king is me
    you just cant drop this shit as hard as Mr B
    im just a little boy from a small little town
    who found some relief in the words he writes down
    now this little cunt wants to try and destroy it
    your noise it, is void bitch
    like last years christmas toys bitch
    try this again it will be more than lyrical
    ill make it physical, analytical your whole crew will be ridiculed

    i do have a video of this, i just gotta get the software to hook my samsung up to the pc but ill post it up as soon as i do
    im crazy in the cranium, skin like Albanians
    flows blow like uranium, a mother fuckin alien
    sent to this earth as the re-birth of damian

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    What is it with all the "fuck your girl" rhymes? Do y'all think that's a measure of your worth?

    Brah, try using that talent to write something more positive or at least more real and substantial.

    With that said, the rhyme itself is well structured and the cadence is tits on. You most certainly have talent.

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    Quote Originally Posted by jefpeace View Post
    What is it with all the "fuck your girl" rhymes? Do y'all think that's a measure of your worth?

    Brah, try using that talent to write something more positive or at least more real and substantial.

    With that said, the rhyme itself is well structured and the cadence is tits on. You most certainly have talent.

    This aint my usual style man, i dont tend to go for the "fuck your girl" rhymes but it was the game he was tryna play so i played it back that was all
    im crazy in the cranium, skin like Albanians
    flows blow like uranium, a mother fuckin alien
    sent to this earth as the re-birth of damian

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    Default Re: merkin sum kid

    Quote Originally Posted by jefpeace View Post
    What is it with all the "fuck your girl" rhymes? Do y'all think that's a measure of your worth?

    Brah, try using that talent to write something more positive or at least more real and substantial.

    With that said, the rhyme itself is well structured and the cadence is tits on. You most certainly have talent.
    PREACHHH!!!! its about time i see someone on this site with the same mindset. what is it with all the negativity and cockyness these days man, its sicking to hear the same shit over and over and over again on the radio, on mixtapes everywhere!!! clean up rap, its getting old man.
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