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    Default Mama's Shoes [Based on a true story]

    Mama's Shoes
    (Based on a true story)

    Sixteen years of age, she sees her future oh so clear
    The time is near, soon her loneliness will disappear
    The sheer excitement of the day has her unprepared
    She stares across the room and assumes he'll always care
    How long can these vows last? I Knew better than to ask
    And once it comes to pass would I be up for the task?
    The past recalls two little girls trapped by alcohol
    Backed against a wall, scared as hell while your parents brawl
    And who could call it? To see something so ironic
    Marriage to an alcoholic who loves the chronic
    It's trouble up ahead, he got lost in the bottle
    Watching her struggle as though lost after each swallow
    Couldn't bare the loss of seeing him constantly sauced
    Crossed the threshold, his actions cold and she pays the cost
    Living for booze and it's to late for a revision
    Mama's shoes fit perfect so now she sees the vision

    Though unfair, this was her burden she was born to bare
    Somewhere between hate, a torn bond she tries to repair
    If this is fate I hate to see the seed she creates
    Can't escape the example that daddy illustrates
    The cycle takes it's toll and now the circle is whole
    Pulled in by it's wake and now another life is stole
    The issue at stake is will she live to see it through?
    Make no mistake, at this rate a divorce won't do
    True to the part, till death do us part from your heart of hearts
    She starts to question his motives yet still won't depart
    She rather live with all the booze induced concussions
    So what's the use if you choose to take the repercussions?
    Brushing off the moves as he breaks you down
    The same news as he rapes you while you don't make a sound
    Living for booze and it's to late for a revision
    Mama's shoes fit perfect so now she sees the vision

    Dear anonymous, how can you live in fear like this?
    Quite tears understanding why Kelly slit her wrists
    No hope to abandon and plus no words to be spoke
    Only vows to be broke and pillows for her to soak
    It's wrote for the woman falling fast beyond my grasp
    Calling to her past posing questions she never asked
    "Mama did you stay cause you hoped to prevent this day?"
    "And when you passed away, was it the price that you paid?"
    "Now can you hear me mamma? Whys he treat me so bad?"
    "Started so sweet, now I'm living the same life that you had!!"
    "Is this the sadness that you faced to keep our roof in place?"
    "I chased the same life you had, now it seems such a waste"
    "Couldn't face the reality that it could be me"
    "The epitome of history and what would be"
    He's living for booze, now to late for a revision
    Mama's shoes fit perfect so now she sees the vision

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    goddamn that was a good story man, I always enjoy reading your posts man, they always paint a vivid picture man. What can I say you got a way with words


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    Default Re: Mama's Shoes [Based on a true story]

    Powerful and contemporary. If rhymes like this were appearing on modern hip hop records, I can't help but think maybe it would turn around in time. Props for the story and my honest admiration at the way you told it, your talent is obvious as is your pain at the way the world has so far evolved. Keep on keepin' on ... perhaps if enough of us write with this kind of honest intensity it will bring about a change, and if not a change, perhaps a desire for change or at the very least recognition that change is needed. It was in baby steps that this world became so dark and it is baby steps that will bring it back into the light.

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    ayo Jef I gave u thanks, cause u see it man, Cesare has an ability that is rarely expressed, its like raw emotions mixed with vivid imagery from words, its like duke can put u in a story with the way hes painting the picture. from the characters dude narrates from. Cesare Borgia, homie keep the fuck keepin on man


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    Default Re: Mama's Shoes [Based on a true story]

    Damn guys, that's the type of feedback i love, the honest and detailed kind, i can't thank you enough, you both hit the nail on the head and seen exactly what it is I'm doing, thanks.

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