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    High hopes for his life, so positive as he spoke
    Known to turn down smoke although he lives his life broke
    Jotting notes in a hurry, consumed by worry
    Scared soon he’ll be thirty while still living dirty
    You see, he yearns to be legit yet every turn
    Bridges seem to burn and nobody seems concerned
    Learned it aint no love for a poor man stacking grips
    And there aint no hand for a poor man when he slips
    Soon comes a shift in attitude, he comes unglued
    Chewed up and spit out, prepared to kill for his food
    Now his mood decays in grip of darker days
    He stays with his clip plotting how to make em pay
    No escape from a hand picked fate and so he breaks
    Waits in the shadows ready to retaliate
    Steps in hollow unloading on the whole front row
    As the bullets flow he knows we live to let go

    Things could be better but at least they got each other
    Unsevered since high school , thought to be forever
    Never in the end could he picture his soul mate
    Saying the two words he knew his heart couldn’t take
    Straight to the gut, he’s grieving because she’s leaving
    No ifs ands or buts but the new man she’s seeing
    He’s seething inside contemplating suicide
    Never once cried, he pushes the feelings aside
    Night time he searches his mind for the reason why
    Tries to tell himself, she’ll be back but knows it’s lies
    Finally his soul dies and with no exception
    So too must hers, now it’s become an obsession
    Never once questions it as he loads up his gun
    Loves her to death and this is how they can be one
    Two gun shots, after it’s said and done two bodies follow
    This shit just goes to show, we live to let go

    Born without a prayer, he was living on welfare
    Although his mamma cares his daddy wasn’t there
    Impaired by circumstances yet still advances
    Romances the mighty dollar, taking chances
    He can’t see no peace until his burdens released
    Portrayed as a beast, they’ll not love him in the least
    Taking shots at the east not knowing when to stop
    Blaming the world for all the problems that he’s got
    Wise words with deep thoughts underneath a thugs disguise
    Straight from the street to play the part but his heart lies
    Starts to believe his hype while lost in a dark Knight
    Knows right and wrong but picks the latter starting fights
    Las Vegas, neon lights at the peak of his height
    Tonight he says goodbye and picks his time and sight
    Pulls up to the light, catches rounds on Flamingo
    Eyes closed, finally dies cause he lived to let go

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    wow....even though this is like rapping, i bet my english teacher would accept it as poetry...where did u learn to write like this? all this figurative language or whatever its callled..its brilliant..
    Last edited by mh bich who els; 25-12-2007 at 1:14 AM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by mh bich who els View Post
    wow....even though this is like rapping, i bet my english teacher would accept it as poetry...where did u learn to write like this? all this figurative language or whatever its callled..its brilliant..
    I'm just a G street poet that speaks on what he sees and tries to make others see what I see, In a way it is poetry, if you count the syllables each line with the exception of a couple contains exactly twelve syllables. Anyhow, I'm self taught but Pac is who taught me how to make others see things the way I intend for them to be seen, not a lot of people get the idea of it. Your welcome to use some of my work for a poetry assignment, i would be VERY interested in what your teacher thinks of my work.

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    Quote Originally Posted by CESARE BORGIA View Post
    I'm just a G street poet that speaks on what he sees and tries to make others see what I see

    i know what you mean,I use to be the same way
    i havent written anything in years, but-
    my messages always come out thru my music

    yours is alot deeper and better then 95% of what i've written
    I like reading your work whenever its up here.
    Peace

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    Default Re: Live 2 let go [Scenarios]

    2pac would be honored, I think. My personal thanks for writing this and sharing it.

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