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    Last one for a while. I'll wait and see if more are desired. I have written literally hundreds of poems, lyrics, short stories and other stuff. Don't want to step on toes or tread where I'm unwanted, though, so let me know if you want to read more.

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    Life According To Don

    Dark sky . . . lightening to gray
    The sun will be rising soon
    Anticipation; a brand new day
    While clouds give chase to the moon

    The sky now blue, the clouds erased
    Wind casts the magic spell of life
    Grass swaying with a simple grace
    Innocent of any impending strife

    Heat of the day, sun in full bloom
    Dancing through the tasks at hand
    Plans and goals, making room
    Time, a plaything, without demand

    Cooler now as the sun descends
    Hectic activity while there’s still light
    Frantically tugging and tying loose ends
    While preparing for the implacable night

    Grey sky . . . darkening to black
    No time left, what was, has been
    Darkness reigns, the day has passed
    Will it ever be . . . So perfect . . . again?

    - © 2001 -Jef Peace

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    Of course we want more, with so few people contributing art like this every bit of it goes a long way, you described what you were aiming for and got the point that i believe you were going after, not many other people are going to be able to keep up with you. 9/10

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    I think we're in danger of becoming exclusive members of the "Jef and Cesare Mutual Admiriation Society. "

    I stand in awe of your work and to see you appreciate mine is a huge bag of diamonds for me.

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    Default Re: Life According To Don

    bump

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    hi Jef, I like all the description in your work and your far more articulate than I am. this was a pleasure to red.
    forgive the small comment, I`m not much of a critic.

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    It's all good. Any comment is better than no comment ... as long as it's sincere and polite.

    Don't worry about how articulate you may or may not be, most of my poems and other rhymes took years to finish. Just write a couple lines every now and then and eventually you'll have a "worthy written."

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