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    Senior Member Rodimus Rhyme's Avatar
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    Default King Of The Underground

    I come through be droppin my flow/ yall bitches know me, im the white shyne po/
    hold on a minute, if yall aint widdit/ gotta move fast, in my new jag/
    i dont give a fuck man, the whip be sleek/ and i know that yall be pissed to see/
    mister me, lyrically gettin on down/ king of the underground bitch , now wheres my fuckin crown/
    HOLD UP, while you bastards gettin holed up/ take two shots, you be missin yo middle like a donut/
    who be comin through, with they fuckin crew/ it dont worry me, cos they gone bury me a g/
    ya boyz step and we gon be droppin ya/ cos we some crazy thugged out mafia/
    i aint forgotten ya, plottin a hit on you fools/ uppercut so hard it knock you outta yo shoes muhfucka/


    what you think? I changed my style here, I thought it was more like my man Shyne

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    Livin the Atheist life Cesare Borgia's Avatar
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    Default Re: King Of The Underground

    what you think? I changed my style here, I thought it was more like my man Shyne
    I thought it was good, except for when you say you "be" doing something, leave that type of slang out and it will sound better, it just don't seem right coming from a white person, other than that i cant find anything wrong with your lyrics, the flow works out pretty good and you kept it interesting, nice work man :thumbup:

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    aigght cool man, after i read your post i went and had a look and actually think so myself. thanx, its good hearing that cos i like your work a lot.

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    Default Re: King Of The Underground

    Thanks, any time you need some feedback I'm more than happy to help

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