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    Default keystyle to freestyle, vote hot or not, yezzir 7 oh tree

    sit back and chill money just like the artic
    i'ma bust skills that u feel when i spark it
    lyrical raw kid deep down in the core
    i break the sound barrier shake the ground and the floor
    register on the Richter in a battle serve a mister
    who thinks he can hang then i bang emerge the victor
    then take a tripta an island reclinin
    in the sunshine with elixir it's rhymin
    no timin for fake friends- with they weak minds when
    life's an uphill struggle you have to keep climbin
    it gets harder than a rock but don't cha stop tryin'
    if you dig deep enuff then you're bound to find a diamond
    in the ruff cut the stone and shape all the facets
    Life has so many stages some get lost in the theatrics
    grab your compass, your atlas and blast this thru ya speakers
    truth only comes to the seekers



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    Default Re: keystyle to freestyle, vote hot or not, yezzir 7 oh tree

    Okay ... it starts out 'look at me' then ends with a suggestion of depth. I kinda' like the blend of ego and extrinsic values ... anyway, nice rhyme. I'd love to see some more rhymes with a message from you, I can see you're capable so bring it.

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    Default Re: keystyle to freestyle, vote hot or not, yezzir 7 oh tree

    yea yo nice rhyming couldn't have more hype but still nice work on the metaphors.

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    Default Re: keystyle to freestyle, vote hot or not, yezzir 7 oh tree

    thanks for the feedback

    i really appreciate it
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    Default Re: keystyle to freestyle, vote hot or not, yezzir 7 oh tree

    Quote Originally Posted by mcsk View Post
    yea yo nice rhyming couldn't have more hype but still nice work on the metaphors.

    yo good lookin on the feed money
    i'm glad you peeped the metaphor tho, cuz i think
    alot of cats gonna sleep on that aspect of the writing

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