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    about five foot one, brown eyes brown hair
    a look in her eyes that tells me she cares
    the way that she stares, eases despair
    nothing can compare to the moments we share
    she fills up my heart with a feeling so pure
    a feelin so raw, youre the one i am sure
    the way that you touch and the tone of your voice
    if i could start this from scratch id still make the same choice
    to be by your side till the day that i die
    and after that day when im sent to the sky
    ill be watching you baby, ill make sure your fine
    as the love that i feel is a power divine


    this is just a few lines i jotted down to cheer up the other other half when she was feelin down
    im crazy in the cranium, skin like Albanians
    flows blow like uranium, a mother fuckin alien
    sent to this earth as the re-birth of damian

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    damn i really liked reading this and would love to read more from you....
    Great job.... And i hope, it worked "the cheer up" that is...
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    not bad man. i liked it

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    sing it to her im sure she'll enjoy much more

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    Yea....thats deff dope.....2 add a finishing touch...you should sing it 2 her ^...as suggested
    or buy a hallmark card the1 that lets you record and has a song right after
    and just sing it and pick a dope/romantic melody right after
    and bring a single rose....i know how you feel thats the same reason
    i made my (Life's Illness) track that's on here~Peace

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    ...and then when you break up she will laugh at you

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    thanks for all the feedback, great look. Cheers
    im crazy in the cranium, skin like Albanians
    flows blow like uranium, a mother fuckin alien
    sent to this earth as the re-birth of damian

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