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    Senior Member Rodimus Rhyme's Avatar
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    Default Juice Freestyle

    This is my life, my time for my rhymes/ to show you how 'Bad' I am 'Boy', Fuck that I'm just gon' 'Shyne'/
    I gotta do what I gotta do to get mine/ So in this race for the cake, I'll see you at the finish line/
    I got tears in my clothes, holes in my shoes/ So with whichever path I choose I just can't lose/
    Fuck the rules, pursue your dreams and make it through/ We can't all be '2Pacs' but believe you got lots of 'Juice'/
    This is how I do, best check the hit/ Get with this, this ain't 'School' you can't 'test' the kid/
    so whoever sent this trick, I'm the lyrical 'Exorcist'/ BITCH I come through and give your 'Neck a twist'/
    Keep this shit playing, I release the 'Heat' I spit 'fire'/ Call me the white 'Kanye', I made it 'Through The Wire'/
    I aspire to acquire the skills of those I most admire/ and retire on a 'note higher' than those of a 'choir'/

    what u reccon?

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    Default Re: Juice Freestyle

    Dude You got that writing down...I could learn a thing or 2 from ya...
    Looking forward to hearing some more from ya.

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    Default Re: Juice Freestyle

    this wasnt bad cuz, i like the flow, yer rhymes got better towards the end and you managed to keep flow. keep up

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    Default Re: Juice Freestyle

    Thanx for the feedback. I don't write an awful lot, but I'm thinking bout spending a couple hours a day writing. I can only learn and get better.

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    this was hot bro, especially after the "this aint school u cant test the kid" line, u really started steppin up after that. Overall, a good piece. Keep it real!!

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    Much Luv

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    Default Re: Juice Freestyle

    haha...yeah..."Give ya neck a twist"...lol
    best line in that. Im diggin it. You got more?

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