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    Junior Member XOSWAGG's Avatar
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    Icon4 Harmony

    I sit and think where did I go wrong
    Promised I would change but now Iím singing the same song
    I canít believe that you stoop so low
    How u did me so cold
    Now our love has grown old

    I take a look back in my rearview
    And the only thing I see are memories of me and you
    How we shared happiness our joys and our pains
    Sunshine and the rain and now you play me like a game

    When we both loved we sang a harmony
    But now it seems our love is in the wrong key
    Can this seriously be happening?
    Cause I canít imaging us without you and me

    No matter what I do itís never good enough for you
    I tried to do my best but you came right back with your gripes
    It never fails cause when storms come you tuck your tail
    how can our love prevail if you keep hiding deep within yourself

    I never thought that I would be all by myself
    My whole relationship seems like it has been put upon a shelf
    I only want you I donít want nobody else
    And though my hearts going through hell, I want your loving for myself
    When we both loved we sang a harmony
    But now it seems our love is in the wrong key
    Can this seriously be happening?
    Cause I canít imaging us without you and me

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    Senior Member Keen Mind's Avatar
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    Default Re: Harmony

    this was cool, to be honest it seems better fitted as a poem than a rap. I mean with a very subtle perhaps piano based beat it could be a rap but it fits a flows more as a poem (to me). the complexity of this is so-so at best...BUT the story you tell in this story was executed very well. keep up

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