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    Senior Member Keen Mind's Avatar
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    Default Guardian Angel (Fall From Grace 3)

    "So the current you're in is pulling you beneath the surface
    you had it all, it was you that chose not to reach your purpose
    now the earth is, giving up, throwing up the white flag
    this is it for you kid, here's a cigarette, take a light drag
    relax and lie back, this will all be over before you know it
    don't sweat it now, somebody always has to blow it"

    who the fuck are you where am I? this isn't the partyin table

    "Keen, sit the fuck down! I'm your guardian angel,
    see thats your problem you'll always party if able
    you sniffed a bit much now your heart is disabled"

    Wait, hold on!

    "There's no time for that, you fucked it up and we need our fuckin writer back
    you're useless now, cant keep a line in tact, you're so fried you cant even try to rap"

    I swear I still got it, I just hit a writers block

    "No, the roads are closed, but all the drugs have masked it
    you couldn't cover your lost ground with words made of elastic
    used to be tough as diamonds, your mind is crackin like plastic
    so much for you bringing rap back to the classics"......

    This has to be some kind of joke, a bad reaction to coke
    ok I'm on a bit of a slope, but I have so much passion I've wrote

    "I'm sorry but we need better, somebody who can be clever
    set of values that leak never, refuses to be the next Heath Ledger
    how can you deliver the right message if your high as the top of the alps
    ok, you have skill but lots of hes and shes can free from the top of the scalp
    you were running more circles than cross words, now you've lost words
    went from boss bird, to a sitting duck, so for careers you've lost yours
    free will includes the freedom of speech but when abused your choice locks
    sorry kid, but the talent and joy stops, we're repossessing your voice box"


    Keen, he shivers and shakes, his liver it breaks, toxins locked in
    he'll never escape, oh how bitter it tastes, death it shocks him
    he hears knocks then...screams as the people walk in to find a dead groom
    the day he was gonna get the big knot from hip hop, he overdosed in the mens room

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    Default Re: Guardian Angel (Fall From Grace 3)

    haha YES!! I loved every line of that! Dope skills son.. yo give me a second to digest that, then i'll be back with a proper comment

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    I had to read that a few times, not because i couldnt find a flow or because i couldnt understand it but because i wanted to make sure i didnt miss anything. Impeccable down to the last syllable. Let us know if your ever put this on audio, im sure i speak for everyone thats ead this when i say i want to hear this on a beat
    im crazy in the cranium, skin like Albanians
    flows blow like uranium, a mother fuckin alien
    sent to this earth as the re-birth of damian

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    Senior Member Keen Mind's Avatar
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    Thanks for all the love, I didn't realize how strong this actually was until reading yer feedback. I guess I need to write more as it comes to mind. Keep on the lookout I'll be posting some new stuff soon some stuff I've been really working at and some old 16s I have kicking around. Keep up

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    Default Re: Guardian Angel (Fall From Grace 3)

    This Is Pretty Illmaculate Each Bar Goes Pretty Hard.. Atleast In My Head... So Yah I Wanna Hear A Audio Of This cuz Its Got Some potential

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    Default Re: Guardian Angel (Fall From Grace 3)

    this nice fa sure

    "No, the roads are closed, but all the drugs have masked it
    you couldn't cover your lost ground with words made of elastic
    used to be tough as diamonds, your mind is crackin like plastic
    so much for you bringing rap back to the classics"......

    good work, keep writtin' cuz you do it well

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