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    Livin the Atheist life Cesare Borgia's Avatar
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    Fuck Tomorrow


    See, I was born headfirst, premature and gave to the herst
    Took the form of a curse so now I write these verses
    If worse comes to worse then my decision is fight or flight
    To live a life of spite that some would say serves me right
    Tonight I rest my head hoping by morning I'll be dead
    It's been said the tears shed vanish upon the death bed
    If it's true then tonight I grip my brew and contemplate
    A fate of living the blues making moves to escape
    Annihilate my existence, everything about me
    I offer no resistance, you're better off without me
    So sleep soundly content knowing I never reached my peak
    Faith never found me and so now this is how I speak
    Do for one another, steer clear of fake motherfuckers
    Them snake motherfuckers will leave you when you suffer
    Under cover of bravado I stay strong and follow
    The motto, living my life saying Fuck tomorrow

    [HOOK] (samples "Why they wanna murder me" by Tha Realest)

    So much danger in these times, afraid to trust a stranger
    From dust too dust so I choose to bust from the chamber
    Confused as a banger and thought to have anger issues
    They refuse to have my shoes cause they rather accuse
    Gather round and meet the man nobody could understand
    The matter at hand, 2 ruin him however they can
    Consumed I plot and plan on the shit just beyond my reach
    Maybe once I'm gone they'll see the things I tried to teach
    So quick 2 preach bout how the end don't justify the means
    Meanwhile my dreams go up in flames stoked by gasoline
    Told all through my teen I could be anything I envision
    Yet never once mentioned the better bet was prison
    If I could make em listen, maybe I'd have an impact
    Though the deck is stacked theres no need to run around strapped
    Looking back, I'm hoping they don't walk the path I followed
    On the attack, living life saying Fuck Tomorrow

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    Default Re: Fuck Tomorrow

    This one isn't as 'clear' as some of your other work. I'm left wondering if the narrator is suicidal or just pissed off.

    Still, excellent writing and a few amazing lines that shine by themselves.
    For example:
    "Annihilate my existence, everything about me
    I offer no resistance, you're better off without me"

    Powerful imagery invoked by that line.

    Keep on keepin' on ... you've got somthing to say and have an incredible way of saying it.

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    That is some powerful shit mate. Sounds like something that would come straight out of Tupac's mouth.

    Powerful shit. Straight up.
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    Default Re: Fuck Tomorrow

    I really liked the word play and the rhymes within rhymes on the same line

    Really felt

    Do for one another, steer clear of fake motherfuckers
    Them snake motherfuckers will leave you when you suffer
    Goes back to when ur up erbody come around but when u down don't nan ----- wanna help u out.

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    Default Re: Fuck Tomorrow

    Wow.....a couple lines reached out and grabbed me, an I can relate to how you must have felt when you wrote this

    these are the lines I felt the most

    So sleep soundly content knowing I never reached my peak
    Faith never found me and so now this is how I speak


    Told all through my teen I could be anything I envision
    Yet never once mentioned the better bet was prison

    keep up man

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    Default Re: Fuck Tomorrow

    yo cesare, I had wrote a long detailed post highlighting my favourite parts and how I pictured it but the server fucked up and I lost it all

    so im just gonna say this, you are a true lyrist, you write from the heart, and you are able to open doors and show things most people otherwise have no idea of thinking of, not from a writers point of view, but from a narrator and readers point of view

    this shit right here is probably 11 outta 10, its not my fav shit of yours, not in a long shot, and thats only cause I cant call a fav or yours, you always showing growth


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    i can c u were influenced by pac, thatz hot, keep it comin

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