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    green stomache bile piled on top of red splashes blood bathes from my tongue lashes
    when shit starts to get drastic car crashes, with brains bashed these bastards
    lasted longer than could have been expected, a statue made from body parts errected
    disected the corpses never to be collected,
    police can inspect it but only see whats impressioned

    "its imperritive to explain, the metomorphosys in my brain, mystic forses are being played, it brings this change"
    "come sit, sip from my holey water/ fresh dripped, from the veins of the innocents ive had to slaughter/ imagine the voice of a daughter, begging for the life of a father/ decided ta let him live turned and shot her"
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    "its imperritive to explain, the metomorphosys in my brain, mystic forses are being played, it brings this change"

    Tryin' to catch a glimpse of whats the truest, but its always just outta range
    Lost, convoluted an’ misconstrued-weighted down by a mass of chains
    Its carnivorous in its appetite-Magnificent in its after-bite
    Leading us on to the afterlife-we still askin’ what the fuck's after, life?

    Decisiveness shown-Harder than stone, stronger than petrified bone, laghin' while we cryin' in a mindless zone/

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    Decisiveness show-Harder than stone, stronger than petrified bone, laghin' while we cryin' in a mindless zone/

    While people dying over seas, and we just crying at home, while we tryin to achieve, in a unreachable zone/
    In an unteachable tone, how we preachin at home, but we all just falling flat, like an unreachable phone/
    But I stay hiding like evidence, the kind that takes precidence, to keeping the guilty safe, so jails not there residense
    Cause the politics relevant, and the runners, is prevelant, its like a new world order that be running so elequant

    Interesting wordplays, with intricate metaphors, fuck a silly ho, I bend them over like bendawhore


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    "Interesting wordplays, with intricate metaphors, fuck a silly ho, I bend them over like bendawhore "

    Buy up some dojah-don't look for closure-if we runin' low, we just turn cash over to the dealer-spend some more
    Turn clear glass bongs sickly brown in a single session-Fuck that-A single bowl-shit we got leaves you parinoid an' stressin'
    Breathless an guessin' at Double Trundled Questions-This shit might leave you dead on your feet, replete in silence

    "Dearly departed?-Not Nearly but trippin' so hard-people might think that ya retarded-mind boggiling shit that still defyin' Science!- Makes you want ta stand up an shout out your definence till you relize-we fucked by self relience-to be strong we need alliance"

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    Makes you want ta stand up an shout out your definence till you relize-we fucked by self relience-to be strong we need alliance"

    And with alliance comes defiance, and you know you cant deny it, fuck the whole world, till its all filled with violence
    And killing and destruction, like weapons that stay busting, a well thought out scam, that leaves living prices influctin
    Like many levels crashing, trying to imagine, all the money wasted, add it up, you just cant fathom
    The shit that they be saying, the lies that they be telling, many people praying, while the bullshit keep on selling

    Try and catch my bullets, as they turn your ass to dust, fuck a nine milla, its the 45 I bust


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    Try and catch my bullets, as they turn your ass to dust, fuck a nine milla, its the 45 I bust




    But the 9's I cluth tips hit you then u spittin up//
    4 shots to his chest aint no way he gettin up//
    4 A.M. bandanaed up we ride early//
    and he aint got be anna smith just to die early//

    But let a ni**a try he gonna get buried under his tombstone//
    Last edited by youngkidd; 19-05-2007 at 6:51 PM. Reason: changed word

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    But let a ni**a try he gonna get buried under his tombstone//
    Left not unlike comercial hiphop- Dead -under the sign of the skull an' Cross bones/
    Surrounded and hounded by scavengers-they can't leave it alone/
    Shadows steady passin' over its outline-Which is all thats left for us to trace/
    Eatin' away by poison-like acid or base will eat the flesh up off your face/


    "The corpse of Hiphop picked over as a culture, by a race of filthy vultures/"
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    "The corpse of Hiphop picked over as a culture, by a race of filthy vultures/"

    thats why i keep the blaze in the holster up under my shoulder/
    the face of a soldier, brains of einstein, body like a bolder, heart could be no colder/
    so try to grasp and hold on to these flows, cause it might leave ya scenceless/
    take away eyes, hands, tongue and nose, then lets you die bleeding and defenceless/

    "a lifetime sentence, my minds eye cryptic, by my side is vivid images, but they not real"
    "come sit, sip from my holey water/ fresh dripped, from the veins of the innocents ive had to slaughter/ imagine the voice of a daughter, begging for the life of a father/ decided ta let him live turned and shot her"
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    "a lifetime sentence, my minds eye cryptic, by my side is vivid images, but they not real"

    Just delusional illusions, within and out my mind, livid while they deal
    Contusions and confusion, what the fucks the time?-Rigid strictures peel
    Right the fuck back to reveal-that you don’t know shit, jack, or the answer to the question
    Retched confessions from a tortured contestant’s inner essence contain the lessens

    “But simple minds like yours are forced to abort the testin’-with no second guessin”

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    “But simple minds like yours are forced to abort the testin’-with no second guessin”

    Chalk outlines your rhymes, as I out rhyme your dimest flows
    'Thats right'-Time after time-thats just how its gotta go
    At the top of your game-thats what you seem to always proclaim

    But I'm above that and still gettin higher like a wild fires flame

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    But I'm above that and still gettin higher like a wild fires flame[/QUOTE]

    these snitches better duck when i aim
    i got two gats homie i aint playin
    these busters wanna buck with my shit
    but they aint talking shit when i spit

    but fuck it let someone else make it rain

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    Quote Originally Posted by Asshole View Post
    But I'm above that and still gettin higher like a wild fires flame
    these snitches better duck when i aim
    i got two gats homie i aint playin
    these busters wanna buck with my shit
    but they aint talking shit when i spit

    but fuck it let someone else make it rain
    Yo, you gotta have the coolest name on this forum :thumbup1:

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    Yo, you gotta have the coolest name on this forum
    But these rappers pissed me off cause their style lead to boredom//
    bore em wit drills, guns, that tear em to more than//
    little pieces of ash yall shit is jus trash//
    the game a car im full speedin wit my foot on the gas//

    And i aint stoppin 4 shit get a load of my swag//
    Last edited by youngkidd; 17-07-2007 at 3:37 AM. Reason: spelled foot wrong rofl
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    Quote Originally Posted by youngkidd View Post
    And i aint stoppin 4 shit get a load of my swag//

    I see your swag its dope like my jag'
    i'm the one dj's fear, make the crowd wild' out and cheer
    i'm that nice, dont forget i roll the dice.

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    Originally Posted by DJMXBI
    im that nice, dont forget i roll the dice.
    Lucky number seven//
    try 2 cheat da game ya get x-boxed 2 heaven//
    by now u should know my rhymes are like a notorious killer//
    cause theyll lock u in a cage and yo soul will grow dimmer//

    fuck da state im da enemy of da nation//

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