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    Default Euthanized **3 verses now**

    When I say euthanized, it means more than just a mercy killing or painless death, when I use it, I use it with dual meanings so let me explain the new definition I coined, YOUTHanized would be more appropriate because it's the youth I'm talking about , the ones who never had a chance to see their full potential because of the society they live in and the hand they were dealt, so when i say somebody was or is being euthanized, it means more than the standard definition, society euthanized them.

    Euthanized



    Back in eighty four who could predict what id live for
    Born premature into these hardships that id endure
    Say no more, Just a baby corrupted as a seed
    Lost and crazy, erupted these thoughts of violence and creed
    Now will i bleed for this life i lead, or was i doomed
    From out the womb i break free headfirst towards my own tomb
    Two months to soon, the curse of rushing to a black hearse
    Wont be the first or the last, living in reverse
    Got em all immersed in every line that i design
    Picking at my verses trying to see inside my mind
    Trying to find a sign of sanity inside of me
    The black sheep of the family, somebody save me
    Distorted visions when i sleep in critical condition
    Creeping through the graveyard loosing my religion
    So scarred up and hard for me to open up my eyes
    Disregard tomorrow, leaving here euthanized

    [Hook]

    Now that I'm grown, I'm wise and choose to go it alone
    Revised the plan, stand on my own, one hand on the chrome
    Who could of known the outcome of what i would become?
    The outcast son, now will i blast or will i run
    Put away my guns in the hopes of a better day
    No more pistol smoke and no more ducking all these strays
    So much promise in the beginning, i reminisce
    A lifestyle of sining, i couldn't be religious
    Now the finished product when nobody gave a fuck
    Struck from the fire then chucked away into the muck
    The throwaways branded useless and underhanded
    Told to go away, cut loose where ever they landed
    Got me thinking, what's the use?, living life as a recluse
    Drinking hundred proof as i tighten up the noose
    Fighting so hard and scarred up, see me dehumanized
    Disregard tomorrow, leaving here euthanized

    [Hook]

    The demons of depression swarmed me and took their form
    Left me torn and bleeding with questions since i was born
    Why mourn the deceased when it's them who get all the peace
    Released from the storm, no longer stuck inside the beast
    A type of suicide in motion they can't describe
    No reason left to hide, so miss Soto up and died
    Nobody knows why she choose to go the way she'd go
    Catching bullets as she tried to blast, then her eyes closed
    Nobody cared to ask why she had to die so fast
    Only stared, wasn't the first and sure wont be the last
    Perhaps she was another victim of the venom
    spinning a poisonous web right from the beginning
    Standing on the edge of a full fledged insanity
    Thoughts of the end scarred and dredged into my memory
    Walking through my mind like it's a graveyard, say goodbye
    Disregard tomorrow, leaving here euthanized

    [Hook + outro]

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    Default Re: Euthanized **3 verses now**

    thats dope man- u could clean it up a little an make the lines have the same syllable count so it flows smootha.
    but i like the concept alot.
    whats the hook?

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    Default Re: Euthanized **3 verses now**

    Quote Originally Posted by Wit-E Beats View Post
    thats dope man- u could clean it up a little an make the lines have the same syllable count so it flows smootha.
    but i like the concept alot.
    whats the hook?
    Count the syllables, there's 13 syllables in each line except for three, and i haven't done a hook for it yet and probably wont.

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    Default Re: Euthanized **3 verses now**

    Yo man, like the first verse the others are tight, but yo man that first scarred is comin' up scared again-just a heads up man.
    Keep on ya grind-an' keep chill.

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    Default Re: Euthanized **3 verses now**

    I could have swore i fixed that lol.

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    Default Re: Euthanized **3 verses now**

    euthanized infront of my eyes
    started in a life of lies
    disregarded like the fat kid in the lord of the flies
    poor child of sin dies and no one cries
    if you under the poverty lines
    watch out you might get euthanized


    theres your hook, thabk me later, hahahaha just playin thats kinda shitty but yo, it was off the top and i typed in in like 10 seconds
    "come sit, sip from my holey water/ fresh dripped, from the veins of the innocents ive had to slaughter/ imagine the voice of a daughter, begging for the life of a father/ decided ta let him live turned and shot her"
    LEATHERFACE
    back again

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    Default Re: Euthanized **3 verses now**

    This is some phat shit man, I thought I allready gave you props for this one here, but I guess I didnt hit reply or something, this is a dope piece of work.


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    Default Re: Euthanized **3 verses now**

    Quote Originally Posted by PDP View Post
    This is some phat shit man, I thought I allready gave you props for this one here, but I guess I didnt hit reply or something, this is a dope piece of work.
    You did when i had just the first verse upped, i finished the rest and re posted it.

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