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    Default Chill

    i glare into the ocean reminisin to my taughts
    for the ocean is the closest place for me to be forgot
    the motin of the water inspires me to write
    for my ambitions light my future oh my future looks bright
    night begins to fall the moon reflects the water
    i light hash in a blunt like i was getin stoned on the altar
    my shado glimmers at the wall i feel so magica
    lthis is paradise to me

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    Default Re: Chill

    is that a rhyme or a verse or what u cooking there homie?,,, overall the word play is good for whatever u are aiming at there, couple typos nothing major, overall it was a good play on words.


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    Default Re: Chill

    duno man lol i jus got bored and made it up it sounds a bit like a rhyme from poetry more than rap lyrics lol

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    Default Re: Chill

    You should expand on this one, I like what i see and would love to see a full three verses from you, i can tell just from this little bit that whatever you write will almost always be good.

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    Default Re: Chill

    Thanks lol ill tink of one to wirte,this one was done on the spot in 5 mins so il put more taught into another

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    yo, mayng thats was hot i like the world play, but u should ryme more and add on.

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