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    Registered User mr2oh3rd's Avatar
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    Default Battle Verse

    ok when i battle i always go off top...but sometimes after a coupleof round i throw a written in there just to keep me fresh foor the next round...yeah i know a freestyke battle is a freestyle battle but half the -----z i battle write they verses so whats one written to to like 5 or 6 lol any way heres the verse and tell me if it would hurt ya feelings lol

    how ima fake thug when i been on the blokk//
    and if the -----s don't like me the bitches will cop//
    fat ----- wit the sex appeal of a runway model//
    But still thug you should run away from the hollows//
    come follow its not hard to find me//
    just look for the bottles of henn and bags of the scami//
    fly boy the girls follow behind me//
    ya mother a M.I.L.F so the next bitch i bag is ya mami//
    an repeat my lines every thing i wrote down//
    every bar every verse is quotable clown//
    faggit -----s on the scrotum they holdin me down//
    next two lines this wak rapper get broke down//
    like Im a legend who the fuck is you//
    if we battled it would be Cef versus Who//
    Hulks bars wit enough power to flip over cars//
    tha boy sick every line infest wit sars//
    blessed wit the gift to spit so articulate//
    and quick to flip and rip you like tissue bitch//
    whats the issue bitch?//
    Smart but i flow slow like autistic Kids//
    grippin fifths when i lick you split//
    dressed in red for the green like a stole Christmas gifts//
    The Grinch of the rap game you rap lames//
    half crazy think you can go against the million dollar baby//
    chillin wit a lady who only fuck me cuz im paid b//
    tryin to get pregnant so she can have my baby//
    a lickle Cef im hotter than a lit Cigarette//
    the kid been a threat since BIG and Lil C Cess//
    or is it lil Ceases i do this shit wit ease//
    please believe ya girlfriend blow i call her breeze//
    you call her wifey but she shiesty//
    cuz she drink Mike Seeds Like it was Ice Tea//
    Coco the boy dick so Big No Homo//
    you could see the bulge in my pants Like the fo' fo'//
    Rock the 5 star like romo but no flu and gray//
    5u-Whoop Blood Gang Cef is Here to Stay//
    Last edited by mr2oh3rd; 29-11-2008 at 8:40 PM. Reason: Kinda sloppy how i wrote it fixed some typos


    "get me the cheddar stackin my bread up the hood had me fed up..//
    had to get lettuce my money my fetish//
    cash i got to get it debit or credit//
    give me the money or ya deaded ya head will get severed//
    mail ya body to the devil to hell i will send it//
    i only beat bitch -----s you could say i was sexist//"


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    Default Re: Battle Verse

    haha this was a hot battle verse, if this was just some random written i would tell you to step up yer complexity but i know sometimes you gotta keep it REAL simple for some people, so good look on the battle verse. keep up

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    Default Re: Battle Verse

    good lookin and you know what i noticed u the only one who give me feed back son lol we should really collab on some keystyle shit sendme a message or something give me a topic and i got u holla at me


    "get me the cheddar stackin my bread up the hood had me fed up..//
    had to get lettuce my money my fetish//
    cash i got to get it debit or credit//
    give me the money or ya deaded ya head will get severed//
    mail ya body to the devil to hell i will send it//
    i only beat bitch -----s you could say i was sexist//"


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    whatz good cef....i felt'cha verse real talk...i feel u on tha freestyle comin off tha top an all thatz real freestylin an since computers an this ish came along i believe that tha freestyle still exists thru tha keyz. I spit freestyle thru keys meanin that "nothin is pre-written, everything dropped at tha moment an spontaneously just like uh nikka had tha mic in his clutch, not takin no hour or uh day to write, ya feel me?

    Anyway good look on tha verse an whaddup to keenmind.............peace


    blas

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    Default Re: Battle Verse

    Thats some Hot spit for Off da Top on some battle ish.

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