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    Default Back To The Start [Lessons Lent]

    I thought id offer up a freebie for whoever might be interested in using it, no copyrights on this one so it's fair game for everybody, all i ask is that i receive an MP3 or WAV of the finished product. enjoy. feedback is always appreciated.


    Back To The Start [Lessons Lent]



    In the space of a second it started out in silence
    Occasionally laced with evidence of a deeper sense
    Shit was tense for a while as a couple of juveniles
    Got you flashing them shy smiles but couldnít change my style
    Who was I? what were my reasons for doing what I did?
    Even as a kid it was borrowed time until a bid
    Canít understand how you decided I should be your man
    To caught up in my scams and to cautious to take your hand
    A motherfucker who never had a plan to succeed
    Could never plant his seeds or be there for the things you need
    As the years slid by I knew out ties would soon sever, so
    I donít believe her when she tells me itís getting better
    Receiving these letters dotted with tears, I have no choice
    Reading, ďAfter all these years, I still need to hear your voiceĒ
    I pick up the phone for a moment and listen to the tone
    Dialing all but one number, Iím better off alone.

    [HOOK]

    It was such a surprise the first time we said our goodbyes
    Caught on the spot by the teardrops that fell from your eyes
    Just a sucker for a woman who cries, who would have thought?
    Got me making these promises to give it another shot
    Soon as I give it a go, the regrets begin to show
    Got me taking my steps walking with my head low
    Depression will soon follow later replaced by questions
    Face to face with myself asking ďwhy canít I learn my lesson?Ē
    Looking in from the outside makes it clear I cant decide
    Sitting on four flat tires while trying to steer the ride
    Now itís time to pass the blame for the shit we share the same
    The pointless game with the aim of spitting on each others name
    Knowing in the end itís going full circle once again
    We got it down to an art and itís useless to pretend
    Now that we both played our parts and left with two broken hearts
    What else are we to do but go right back to the start.

    [HOOK]

    Ill probably never understand your ways until the day
    Me and you can finally call it quits and break away
    Yesterday you ruined my life bitch, today you make it rich
    This shit contradicts itself, itís like we donít have a nitch
    I swear somewhere thereís gotta be a place to clear the air
    Cause we wouldnít still be together if we didnít care
    Instead of arguments and claims of years we both resent
    How can we vent the pent up pains and be content?
    These are the memoirs of a man tired of hitting the bars
    Downing shots of Tangaray drowning my memories scars
    In the beginning the perfect couple we envisioned
    Lost momentum when all we tried to do is be like them
    Making a living, white picket fence and couple children
    The American dream split and left another ending
    Perhaps the time spent together was a lapse in judgment
    No second guessing, now were reflecting on lessons lent.

    [HOOK + OUTRO]

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    Default Re: Back To The Start [Lessons Lent]

    I'm not really feelin' this one, which is not too say its bad-its really fairly well put together, with a good depth to it, but its not up to the level of your usual drops.

    By the way whats Tangaray? I heard of and have partaken in Tanqueray(sadly though at the moment all I got is a forty of Gilbys gin-good, but not the Tanq.) is this what you meant, or is tangaray a Juice and gin cocktail, made from mixing Tang orange drink with Tanqueray?

    Peace Cesare. Hasta Luego!

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    Default Re: Back To The Start [Lessons Lent]

    Tanqueray is what i meant.

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    Default Re: Back To The Start [Lessons Lent]

    Anyone else have an opinion?

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    Default Re: Back To The Start [Lessons Lent]

    i think its real gude.
    seems real personal

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    idk bout dis one.

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    Default Re: Back To The Start [Lessons Lent]

    Damn I like this.
    It reminds me of Pac for some reason lol.
    Nice drop fo real.
    I would love to see somebody make somethin from this song.
    If used by the right person, it can deff be a hit.

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    Default Re: Back To The Start [Lessons Lent]

    Thanks for the feedback guys :grin-gun:

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