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    Devine Influence, making ‘pusses run’ like “vagina fluids’ –
    It’s time you knew it
    Ny’s sequential credentials are meant for putting indents in ya mental …Repent is eventual, kats couldn’t ‘trace me’, if they ‘stenciled in pencil’ -
    Leaving Individuals in Pain, Slain, Demented in Domes... I was born doing this; I was
    Practically invented in Zones –-
    Hittin It home, with a drop you couldn’t see in 3D… But you only need your left eye so your right brain knows lyrically you Need Me-
    See I come thru these boards like it was my daily life… And rip thru every one of them like they were my baby’s wife-
    Mr.Nyce Guy, yeah that’s fuckin right, with a pen that comes off sharper than a cuttin’ Knife-
    Got you Huggin Nights, scared you’ll neva see anotha day… Honestly half of you suck on this board, makin it rapping? You betta find anotha way-


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    So good rhyme scheme and wordplay and metaphors....good work

    But it wouldn't make a good song, but as something for a battle or to showcase your talent, it's good stuff

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    presumed_dead, didnt know u could write that good

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    god damn it nice opener sh**s Funny nice wordpaly and methaphores in it to like ^^^ he said you are good

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    definate good shit man keep it crackin
    "come sit, sip from my holey water/ fresh dripped, from the veins of the innocents ive had to slaughter/ imagine the voice of a daughter, begging for the life of a father/ decided ta let him live turned and shot her"
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    ^^^^ thanks bro, appreciate the appreciation


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    no prob man imma be checkin all your shit you got that word play like banks and pap down like i said in my post ill colab with ya anytime, and you if you got any audio i want ta hear that and check mine if ya want
    "come sit, sip from my holey water/ fresh dripped, from the veins of the innocents ive had to slaughter/ imagine the voice of a daughter, begging for the life of a father/ decided ta let him live turned and shot her"
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    Ill get it crackin son


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    Yea, like they said, im fealing the metaphors, not to many people have that, not to mention some of the words you use, i like that more complex shit, keep writing and ill keep reading.

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    ^ Thanks man, the same to you to man, I like your drops as well,,,, I plan on dropping a couple more tonight or tommorow,, right now im at work so you know, but hey im getting payed to post :thumbup:


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    oh damn homie i need that job
    "come sit, sip from my holey water/ fresh dripped, from the veins of the innocents ive had to slaughter/ imagine the voice of a daughter, begging for the life of a father/ decided ta let him live turned and shot her"
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    Thanks homey


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    uppin because I just reread this shit and laughed my fuckin ass off

    and I aint smoked yet lol


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    Droppin' metaphors like Jack da ripper dropped whores ... I'm diggin' the rhyme nice flow real time and I'm hopin' ya got more ... Yeah, tight, more than alright, I'd be nervous 'bout steppin' up to bat with a rhymin' cat that can drop it like that.

    You got it my man, use it and flaunt it and enjoy the props 'cuz this life don't give you a damn thing except opportunity, you gotta' make it happen and rhymin' like this ... well, you just might make it.

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    gyeah.............


    props on the props


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