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    Senior Member MicMonster's Avatar
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    Default Aint got no name but tell me what you think of it so far

    <Yeah I know i probly dont have to spell every punchline out for yall. But i just wanted to make sure. Im supposed to collab wit my homeboy and this is my verse. Good? Wack? Trash? Let me know mayne.>


    Hold up, Al Capone on the microphone
    I Show up, my flow fresh as my cologne
    Put it down proper with this underground etiquette
    Dedicate these predicates sick so I medicate
    And pray at the grave till the game's 3rd day <--(Jesus rose on the 3rd day)
    And greet it with bouquets, notebooks of wordplay
    Like Vader on the track, on the attack now
    I put the forces on the G, try not to blackout <--(get it? star wars and gForces)
    And who do verses, spit em like voo-doo curses
    And move through the surface exploring mental universes
    ...But of course this defined as divine purpose
    Cant reverse this, Persian, so just call it curtains <--(Prince of Persia ref)
    Mind over matter, so im thinking with the inkpen
    dudes puff they chest but the flow cause shrinkage
    My oratory leave ya life like a horror story
    These verses are the monsters I create in my laboratory
    Last edited by MicMonster; 03-10-2008 at 8:58 PM.

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    Default Re: Aint got no name but tell me what you think of it so far

    thats damn nice i like. good word play

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    Default Re: Aint got no name but tell me what you think of it so far

    a lil jumbled mit work with the beat tho....ur word plays st8 sick tho u got skills!

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    Default Re: Aint got no name but tell me what you think of it so far

    Reading the posts U made I can tell U are an intelligent individual. I'm feeling this 1 a lot more than the Ninja 1. Keep posting, reading you is interesting. Thanks for the share..

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