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    Default 4 My Mama

    Wrote this for my mam finna give it 2 her for christmas with some otha shit i got her... it aint no random poetic gift we just been having a few ups and downs so yeauh.. i need 2 correct some of tha spellings and make a few edits but just want some feed yall props



    Love the world could never understand

    Passing every bound

    Eternal love at times lost but undeniably always found

    For the hard times we will together face

    Before human nature takes its course at its given pace

    Know first

    You will forever have a place in my heart

    Eternal love

    Never permenatly lost

    Shedding tears in the night in times of hoplessness

    Common fears of your son strayin in his life

    Trust in me in this life ive chose to live with

    Where my love is pure and my mind is focused

    In a true meaningful life far from societys

    A true lived life never closer to reality

    Ya Baby

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    Default Re: 4 My Mama

    Yo I liked this a lot. Pretty soulful even down to the structure and spacing of it all... lol was that "Ya Baby"line a part of it?

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    Default Re: 4 My Mama

    naw tha outro lol

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