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    Senior Member Keen Mind's Avatar
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    Default 10 mins

    taking a play out of rich hustles play book with a quick freestyle...10 MINS!!!


    stop testing me, I'm on a mission for mills
    hide the evidence, investigators can't find the missing and killed
    just listen and chill, to stories I'm spittin, its written but still
    so much stress, i need a prescription for pills
    and stop sending me the description of bills
    fuck that, i'm paranoid of the cops, hand me the toast
    turn around hand you some dough and be friendly fo sho
    yo, if being cool is joking
    I'll slice you...SIKE, nah but the tool is roasting
    before I lay the track i make sure the booth is smoking
    I'll kill you and leave your chest open, so your spirit can leave
    my burner burns at 200 to the nearest degree
    its burning any mother fucker nearest to me
    and if you need dope, i know the place you should be
    but keep it on the down low, you ain't hear it from me

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    Default Re: 10 mins

    i can find the rhymes there, but a bit difficult to read. imho
    anyways, not bad at all.

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    Senior Member Keen Mind's Avatar
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    Default Re: 10 mins

    yeah, this was really just written as it came to mind, and as i look at it now, i see your point. good looks

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    Default Re: 10 mins

    Alot better than I could do in 10, so it was alright...you usually put out some quality work so be proud of where you are as a writer, but dont stop getting better...EVER

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    Livin the Atheist life Cesare Borgia's Avatar
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    Default Re: 10 mins

    For something that was written as it come to mind i gotta say its pretty good, its hard to be overly critical of a freestyle type rhyme, if you came with that during a freestyle session you would probably walk away the winner.

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    Default Re: 10 mins

    yo Keen?

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    Default Re: 10 mins

    Haha, I Likes That Lol....My Turn. Off Top Right Now...

    My N*gga Keen Killed It, Me Ima Bring It Back
    And Kill It Again, The Homicide Team Is Back
    I Been Gone For A While But Its Time Now
    Me And Keen Back To Back For A Rhyme Now
    [Pause] It Aint Trickn If You Got It
    Well Ima Stunt Cuz Its Crowded In My Pockets
    Hustlin, Workin, Grindin Stackin
    N*gga My Only Friends Is Grant, Franklin, And Jackson

    Ima Stop Right There...But Good Shid My N*gga Keen.
    We Need To Collab On Some Shid Homie


    NEED BEATS?!?! NEED GRAPHICS?!?! NEED LYRICS?!?!
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    "PROFESSIONAL PERFECTIONISM"

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    Default Re: 10 mins

    This was coo...no doubt...
    Nothin' spectac, but it was ill...
    Since this was a quickie...
    flow an rhyme was hard to catch
    ....
    Was still a nice drop though...

    good shit though bruh....7/10
    Last edited by Young Moe; 27-12-2009 at 8:02 PM.

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