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    Default Work!(new beat)

    https://soundcloud.com/molotovrain/work

    check it out and let me know what ya think
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    Default Re: Work!(new beat)

    coo beat there are parts of the main melody that don't sit well with me and the hihats are a bit too loud. Just tighten up the mix and maybe shorten up the intro. good shit

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    Default Re: Work!(new beat)

    Thanks for the feedback! And taking the time to listen to my beat. I will keep that in mind

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    Default Re: Work!(new beat)

    No prob keep at it.

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    Default Re: Work!(new beat)

    The mix is off like ineedrogue said. I would add further that this type of beat belongs more in the "ringtone rap" generation (like Soulja Boy Tell 'Em) and you might want to update.

    Further, I would suggest that you hunt in earnest for your own sound. No one ever got famous copying other cats. The trick is to INCORPORATE other peoples shit into your stew, not to outright imitate. That said, it would have done well about 8 years ago.

    The next track, Shadow Boxing has come on since I started this post.. and it kinda underscores what I'm talking about. Your use of the kung-fu movie dialogue OBVIOUSLY wouldn't have happened if the RZA hadn't done it (and run it into the ground) first. And it's too bad, because with a li'l TLC, the beat itself could be hot.

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    Default Re: Work!(new beat)

    Ay YO.. the VERY NEXT track (Sucka) sounds like it came from ANOTHER movie that RZA used on a Ghostface album!! "Ay boy, tha nigga's whole style is chump."

    For real, you need to search for your own shit.

    And again, the beat has potential, but is so obviously influenced.

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    Nobody influenced my shit...all original...and the track you talking bout its a sampled track homie. a lot of people have used that sample

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    Default Re: Work!(new beat)

    Hahahaha, aight. let's do this.

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    Default Re: Work!(new beat)

    I just realized that this:

    https://soundcloud.com/jonnywutang/sucka

    Isn't you. It came on after your shit on SC. Same for "Shadow Boxing." I realize it wasn't you. I take back what I said. Whoever did those tracks ought to be ashamed of themselves.

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