snare needs to be sharper, bass could be smoother, and somethin's up with the flute
I think the flute is ok, but there's a string of piano chords at the end of the melody that don't fit, imo. A lil mixing could take this track higher. EQ the bass a bit, or check your volumes. Idea's there, tho.
yeah just ain't doin it for me. alot of work need to be done to this track. mixing for one.
way to much bass and the flute is very off
fix that man