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In Back with a R&B Beat

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    i was gone for a lil bit trying to get better with my beats but now im back...





    this is a new beat..what do you guys think..feedback?
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    Default Re: In Back with a R&B Beat

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    ok my bad i fix it now

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    Default Re: In Back with a R&B Beat

    Not bad overall. Some of the sounds sound like theyre clashing a little, idk if its a key thing or just the way they sound.

    Clap could come up. Mix overall needs work. Levels are all over the place.

    Not bad though...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jon Ren View Post
    Not bad overall. Some of the sounds sound like theyre clashing a little, idk if its a key thing or just the way they sound.

    Clap could come up. Mix overall needs work. Levels are all over the place.

    Not bad though...
    ok thanks...yeah my mix aint that good yet thats what im trying to get better at..thanks i appreciate your feedback

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    cool beat i def see where u goin wit this only thing is im not feelin the synth that comes in on the hook for sum reason idk what it is.....but other than that the beats hot, sounds like sumthin u gotta really flow to

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    Default Re: In Back with a R&B Beat

    Nice beat. Verse sounds a little empty till the arp comes in, i would play around with some more sounds/melodies to fill it out a little. I really like the arp and the chorus synth. Could be mixed a little better, but u can easily fix that later. Hot stuff man keep it up

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    Default Re: In Back with a R&B Beat

    First synth that comes in sounds kinda cheesy, didn't like the sine choice either, Mix sounds non-existant also. Idk, wasnt really feeling this, melodies werent doing it for me, even for the type of music it was meant to be. Maybe a different progression choice in your chords would make it better.

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    Default Re: In Back with a R&B Beat

    This is pretty good!
    Those piano/strings that come in at the beginning need the lows taken out of them a little as far EQ.
    Also, the synth lead and the piano/strings are clashing.
    This is a cool feel good RnB track though!
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