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    Icon14 Gladiator looking at the stars pop beat

    hey guys! im new here with a beat. its fun pop simple gladiator looking at the stars at night in the backyard and think about your biggest dream. lay in the grass and dream. heres the beat. needs heavy work but im looking for melody opinions.

    https://soundcloud.com/vintagekobe/club-fantasy

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    Default Re: Gladiator looking at the stars pop beat

    You have a good start right there. I dont know the musical terms for what i want to say right now so you might not know what im talking about but you have a lower melody in there that is the center of your beat. The higher melody doesnt belong, it just makes it sound busy it would probably fit in the beat if you slowed down the tempo. You should add in some chords or arpeggiation for that pop style.

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    Default Re: Gladiator looking at the stars pop beat

    nice template i can really see this going somewhere i say work on some variations and your percussions and you got yourself a nice pop hit

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    Default Re: Gladiator looking at the stars pop beat

    thanks guys i appreciate the feedback.

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