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Better Dayz - R&B - Newb attempt :)

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    Default Better Dayz - R&B - Newb attempt :)

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    Hey... Just starting out..... appreciate any feedback......

    Just make note that this is not mixed - havnt mastered those skills yet..


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    Default Re: Better Dayz - R&B - Newb attempt :)

    For just starting out your doing pretty well. I really like the feel of this track and once you start mixing this is going to come alive! Your progression is real smooth, you have a good ear for sound selection as well. Keep doing your thing.

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    Default Re: Better Dayz - R&B - Newb attempt :)

    thank you

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    Default Re: Better Dayz - R&B - Newb attempt :)

    Nice song. Good instrument selection. And I like the change-up before the last chorus. Off to a good start!

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    Default Re: Better Dayz - R&B - Newb attempt :)

    To me...this beats needs alot of work....like the sounds either need effects added or u need better versions of the sounds u used....also those snares are super soft....even singers like a lil snap to there drums at least....but this would be a perfect beat for like a tutorial video or something as is
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    Default Re: Better Dayz - R&B - Newb attempt :)

    you are way further along than i was when i first started out lol...good joint...like the switches...like the sound selection...dope joint...keep it up

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    Default Re: Better Dayz - R&B - Newb attempt :)

    hey.. apologise for the extremely late responses.. but i keep my word.. sooo..

    @Mid Range Jumper - tks not sure if you were really after any feedback.. but i checked out your soundcloud and they are pretty good.. i really liked Into The Fire..

    @ acepro - agree with EVERYTHING you said lol.. since im just starting out i really havnt build a proper library.. but its hard to fight the urge to make music regardless of what you have to work with.. but tks.. appreciate ur feedback.. I checked out ur stuff.. really chilled.. i like i dont think there is really anything I can say that you will find useful except that i enjoyed listening to ur stuff

    @ BDotSmokez - thank you VERY much! I will most definitely try

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    Default Re: Better Dayz - R&B - Newb attempt :)

    This beat was great. I think it could still use a bit more excitement though. It just wasn't captivating, or motivating. The production was still good though, I could hear this beat on a movie of some sort.

    Get at me for mixing though if you need it fam. I mix tracks for $25 a piece.
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    Default Re: Better Dayz - R&B - Newb attempt :)

    Nice start up, track is kinda dry, but you'll get it. The melody is smooth and catchy. Nice job!
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    Default Re: Better Dayz - R&B - Newb attempt :)

    really enjoyed this the guitar composition was very very nice melissa.. do you play the keyboard classically?
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    Default Re: Better Dayz - R&B - Newb attempt :)

    Tks I do play keys yes.. Not so much interested in the classical side of things compared to modern rnb altho I have sat thru those painful exams lol

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    Default Re: Better Dayz - R&B - Newb attempt :)

    It made it all worth it tho lol ive been doing piano for half a year but go more off ear as oppose to using scales lol

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    Default Re: Better Dayz - R&B - Newb attempt :)

    Yo honestly if you look at this beat another way it can actually work. Great job starting out man. If everything in this song was mixed with more effects then this song would be crazy man so I can see exactly where you are going with it. Hey it's way better than what I had when I started out. You can also look at this track in a different way which would work out perfectly exactly like it is. Imagine how nice this song would sound on the menu of a Wii game console. that is like the perfect them song for it. That is not a bad thing either. It's very calm, smooth, with a mellow feel to it. Great job homie.

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    Default Re: Better Dayz - R&B - Newb attempt :)

    This sounds like a great beat as you're just starting out, have you got any more since this beat?

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