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Default This Is My First Cover - 08-03-2006, 05:19 AM

Being this is my first Cover i want to rated on a scale of 1 to 10.......:idea:


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Default Re: This Is My First Cover - 08-03-2006, 05:28 AM

cant see it, post anyother link of it, ur code is messed up
  
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Default Re: This Is My First Cover - 08-03-2006, 12:21 PM

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Default Re: This Is My First Cover - 09-03-2006, 01:37 AM

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Image is not sharp and you have barely done any great fx to it.

Very hard to see anything on it either. The dudes are very blury and the light in the background is too dominant.

Excellent try though do like the font but once again too blury etc.
  
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Default Re: This Is My First Cover - 13-03-2006, 04:33 AM

i give it a 4 too ^ what he said
  
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Default Re: This Is My First Cover - 15-03-2006, 06:58 AM

yeah a 4... might want to try not overlapping the font over dudes head... nice try tho

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Default Re: This Is My First Cover - 07-04-2006, 06:35 AM

yea and dont make your focal point translucent because thats what you want people to focus on. If the focus point is transparent people focus more on the background. another good idea would be to try to make the artists match with the background. Try givin them an orangish brown hue.
  
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Default Re: This Is My First Cover - 09-04-2006, 05:27 AM

also, try to start with the biggest, best quality photo possible...
  
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Default Re: This Is My First Cover - 11-06-2006, 07:45 AM

how can a graphic be so blurry.......i'll give it a 3 tho........you have potential.......
  
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Default Re: This Is My First Cover - 19-06-2006, 03:13 AM

i give it a 4
  
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Default Re: This Is My First Cover - 02-08-2006, 02:20 AM

It's a 3ish...

The dudes bein transparent ain't good. Nothin on this cover draws attention 2 itself but the light... and the light is one of the things on here that doesn't matter. And it's kinda random.
  
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Default Re: This Is My First Cover - 02-08-2006, 04:09 AM

I gotta dissagree with yall, i like it and give it a 7.
  
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Default Re: This Is My First Cover - 05-08-2006, 05:30 PM

i give it a 5 but it looks like you might have cut dude on the lefts neck a lil bit when you were tracing them
  
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Default Re: This Is My First Cover - 26-08-2006, 12:06 PM

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Take the outer glow of the dudes...and the blending..shit looks whack

try and find some cool ass fonts...and practice text...

overal...for your 1st..shits hot :P ahah
  
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Default Re: This Is My First Cover - 11-11-2007, 10:25 PM

good concept but lose the transparency. i give it a 4. also sometimes it cooler to use individual photos of people in a group than just a group shot. mix it up and never be afraid to try ANYTHING. Also get some fonts fam...
  
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