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    Default Tupac ft. Akon - Retrospectively Locked Up

    I worked for a while on this one, I knew right away which Pac i was gonna put on it, but no idea what to put for the hook till I ran across this and it couldnt have went any better. Hope yall enjoy and any feedback would be cherished and written down in a diary right next to my heart, just kiddin keep the feeback comin.

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/13436893db67476e/

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    Default Re: Tupac ft. Akon - Retrospectively Locked Up

    very nice, i'm def. likin the vibe.

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    i actually think this shit is fire
    i love the beat, pac sounds sick
    you really did your damn thing
    keep it up man
    10/10

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    this some depressed shit that make me fell like crying this is some hard shit man
    best shit i herd in a long ass time real and remixed

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    Thanks so much for the feedback Im really glad yall liked it

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    good try on the mix. keep it up. the chorus is off bar, and i dont think it fits. cus pac is tallking bout he will never call his girl a bitch agin, but akon talks bout being locked up..how does that fit?

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    wow good job you kept the original feel of pac and it just all flows perfect it was mad props 10 / 10 keep it up

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    Quote Originally Posted by raf View Post
    good try on the mix. keep it up. the chorus is off bar, and i dont think it fits. cus pac is tallking bout he will never call his girl a bitch agin, but akon talks bout being locked up..how does that fit?
    Im glad somebody said somethin cuz what I was goin for is Pac is writing to his girl from the pen, and all this shit is goin on while he is locked up. He wont call her bitch again because she is the only person who constantly keeps in contact with him. I know its a stretch for the first verse but I think the 2nd and 3rd are perfect for the track.

    thanks for the listen everyone keep the feedback comin. I got 10s so far, yall makin me blush over here

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    wasup g-unit, 1st off it was a smooth ass track and the hook was off just a lil bit from what i could hear (very minor mistake), but overall the concept of the track was smooth like i said, just tighten that hook up and all is good 9/10, only reason was the hook, would have been a 10 but the hook brought the number down, keep doin ur thing gunit practice and good feedback will help u out fam..peace!!!

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    i will def see if i can change that up Harvey thanks for the feedback

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    Quote Originally Posted by GUnitKilla84 View Post
    Im glad somebody said somethin cuz what I was goin for is Pac is writing to his girl from the pen, and all this shit is goin on while he is locked up. He wont call her bitch again because she is the only person who constantly keeps in contact with him. I know its a stretch for the first verse but I think the 2nd and 3rd are perfect for the track.

    thanks for the listen everyone keep the feedback comin. I got 10s so far, yall makin me blush over here
    ic good idea then....good effort and keep it up...u got potential

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    ^^^

    thanks man, i should have explained it to begin with glad you like it though

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    ye man thats sum chilled out weed tokin shit rigght there 9/10

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    ye man thats sum chilled out weed tokin shit rigght there but i tought pacs 2nd verse migght be out slightly 9/10

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    Default Re: Tupac ft. Akon - Retrospectively Locked Up

    i really liked it dude but the 2nd helping of akon is out and the tune seems too slowed down.. when akon sings it fits well with the tune.. personally i'd have speeded the whole lot up a couple of notches..
    i'm no expert tho so i'm just sayin what i think..

    peace

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