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    Default Peaches Vs Project 86

    'ello all. I'm going to go ahead and steal some thunder here. This is my FIRST (ABSOLUTE FIRST) attempt at and form of digital music. I've never DJ'd, mixed, or recorded in my life. Believe me, I have a keen ear, but I was more in a rush to produce something just so I could at least learn some of the tools that I am using (software). I mashed Peaches- EFF the pain away (about her sexual proclivities) with Project 86's- P.S ( a Christian rock band, the p.s. stands for Porn sucks and the theme of it is about lust and the isolation that porn causes). There is also the "Obsolete" panning sample that is from another Project 86 song.

    The File is here

    [BU] Peaches vs. Project 86- P.S.(Porn Sucks the Pain Away)

    Things that are apparent to me that are [b]wrong[b] with the track:

    1. The first and following "F*CK THE PAIN AWAY"'s are late in synching. I had the original acapella to the Peaches track. I should have cut each sample (either that or learn how to fit the vocal over the beat) and inserted them.

    2. The Japanese trashy type of sample(the female voice is talking about being lonely), that I could have expanded upon more by adding more noise before and after the sample (it starts late and ends before the bar).

    3. Overall volume levels.

    4. Added a few more touches of color. It tends to bore quick.

    ANY CRITICISM OR FEEDBACK IS APPRECIATED


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    Default Re: Peaches Vs Project 86

    first thing I gotta say is get a soundscan or something, this will not get a lot of replys because people would rather hear a stream then download a file, ya feel me,,,,

    I did download it tho, and I cant say that its shit, seeing as it your first beat, so imma be real, its not my type of music, but as a musician I am open to all sounds, I did like your snap drums there, I liked the guitar, I did not like the sample or whatever the verses are

    overall I see potential, but this drop is a 4/10

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    Default Re: Peaches Vs Project 86

    Appreciate the comment. Am totally interested in soundscan. am just a bit concerned with the legalities of posting the material. However, I do realize that parody laws protect me. So I might just do that.

    Again, thanks for taking the time to critique, even if it's not your forte.

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    Default Re: Peaches Vs Project 86

    Sucks the pain away. I give this a 7/10 just cuz for a first time its pretty sick. The song format is rather monotonous, but i dig the guitar and some of the crunchy bass sounds, although I'd prolly use those as fills for dull space instead of as a main sound. Overall I think you did a great job, considering your level, but as a song, I wouldn't give it top notch marks.

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