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    Default Eminem - Listen Till i collapse (beat prod by me)

    eminem-listentillicollapse.mp3 - 4.54MB

    thinkin bout doin a eminem mix tape....tryin to beat ef to the punch lol but yea....

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    Default Re: Eminem - Listen Till i collapse (beat prod by me)

    Oookay... This Doesnt Work IMO Dude... The Beat Jus Drops Like, Waaayyy Too Quick & Abit Off Aswell... Deff Work On The Drum Pattern, Id Copy The Pattern From The Original & Then Work Around Your Sample, But As You've Done It, Its Not Working For Me...

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    Default Re: Eminem - Listen Till i collapse (beat prod by me)

    this beat wasnt soppose to be for it ...it one of my own beats...

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    Default Re: Eminem - Listen Till i collapse (beat prod by me)

    ite sokalm, i like the beat fam but it was not on point at all, nothing was matching at all, i think u definately got to redo this one!!!! redo and i will give it anotha listen playa, because i like the beat...peace!!!

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    pella is not sync with the beat, did you just like throw the pella over one of your pre made beats.
    what I would do is get the original song find the bpm, then listen to what words start on the
    first kick and snare and construct your beat around that. Apropos to what S.harvey mentioned
    what are you using to mix because the beat is dope...

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    Default Re: Eminem - Listen Till i collapse (beat prod by me)

    THE BEAT: Definitely has some potential... Like the odd goofy intro gives great impact when your hip hop loop hits however, I would leave it just like that as an "INTRO" and nothing more. You loose all the impact of the remix the moment you break back into that goofy beat after Nate's chorus. I completely lost interest in the whole thing at that point... I would take your main loop and work a variation of it to break for Nate's chorus. Again same with the ending.

    THE VOCAL: Definitely agree with schizonic... The 1st verse comes in "Off" beat. Em starts 1st verse spitting, "TILL-I- CO-LAPSE" 1st down beat should hit simultaneously as Em says, "LAPSE" I took a look at the BPM of your beat and got roughly 96.84 BPM. The vocal you mix is not at same BPM... Timing is off throughout most of the mix as a result and you can really detect during Nate's choruses. Way Off...

    MY RATING: Beat: (7 out 10) Mix: (5 out 10)

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    Default Re: Eminem - Listen Till i collapse (beat prod by me)

    not sure if you will beat ef
    i sent her 24 pellas of eminem a few days ago lol
    you need work on where you drop the vocals
    cause this didnt work at all
    i like the beat but not for em man
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    Default Re: Eminem - Listen Till i collapse (beat prod by me)

    nah man this was all over the place..
    pella too loud..
    beat dont match slims style..
    thrown in at wrong point..
    beat comes in with a bang which jus dont seem to work..

    ..other than that, i loved it lol

    nah it could do with a few tweeks and maybe it'd sound alreet..?

    peace..

    i'm gettin an eminem mix tape done too.. a fkn 3way battle, me you n the mighty ef!!!

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    Default Re: Eminem - Listen Till i collapse (beat prod by me)

    yeah ima do a better version this was just to see how it would come out type deal guess not great from the responses thanks now let this thread die or delete it lol

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