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    Default Down To Buisness || YF

    anotha mixtape cover i was fuccin round wit leave some feed


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    not feeling the fonts at all, font style doesnt fit the pic

    alright technique though, not as good as that other one you did

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    i like the font, but the letters are too cropped up :S

    did u use some kind of filmgrain on the pic?

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    pretty good job in blending
    but try usin a diff font for the hosted by part

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    Default Re: Down To Buisness || YF

    Buisness? is that correct ( i don't knwo 4 sure cuz i'm from belgium and english isn't my language.

    and the "to" isn't really good visible.
    and the "hosted by ...." is weird.

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    Default Re: Down To Buisness || YF

    i unno i was juss doin it for n diss is an old peice its all good its wutever good looks on the feedback

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    Default Re: Down To Buisness || YF

    ya Buisness is spelt wrong
    its Business

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    - whats wrong
    beveled fonts
    "business" is spelt wrong
    the glow around "nexlevel ent presents"

    - whats good
    alignment of text
    film grain looks good
    blending factors

    - tips
    try using a dynamic font, along with basic effects... sometimes advanced effects can hurt the quality of the graphic.
    colors that blend when viewed sometimes help, like the fonts, maybe match his hoody trim or summin.

    anyway, 6/10 due to font, it throws it off...

    good job though keep it up

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