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    Default WhootyWho Ft THC and S.I.K. - Murkin Season



    Im the 1st verse let me know what yall think thanks fam

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    Default Re: WhootyWho Ft THC and S.I.K. - Murkin Season

    This type of track won't really get anywhere these day...topic wise. Other than that I'd say really work on your flow and breath control because it sounds waaaaaay too choppy. Please change that hook. After listening to all the verses...all of you can use some work. Don't take it as hate but you guys need work. How long have you been doing this?

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    Default Re: WhootyWho Ft THC and S.I.K. - Murkin Season

    Since Jan thats my 12th or 13th song ... no worries i can take critism ... i ussaly never write stuff like that most of my other songs are about how corprate rap is ruining music andthe struggle of life i agree these type of tracks are a dime a dozen thanks for the indepth feed back though

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    Default Re: WhootyWho Ft THC and S.I.K. - Murkin Season

    Agree with some of what Clinton said. If you just started Jan of this year, it's really not too bad. However, when you record, you don't always have to record a verse completely through in one take. In this case it might have sounded better if you had recorded certain parts on a take, then other parts on another take. That way certain words wouldn't have sounded rushed, and you wouldn't have had the breathing problems.

    Keep at it, the more you record, and listen to other songs, the more you'll learn

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